Can We Still Reclaim Our Innocence? - Comments

I like it now update it knefuvrdsngkvengrog.
PLEASE
I NEED TO KNOW

I like it now update it knefuvrdsngkvengrog.
PLEASE
I NEED TO KNOW

I fucking hate cliffhangers with a burning passion, you better update soon! I'm dying here. <3

Nuuu.
Why you cut me off there? XD
Update soon!

~Pansy Xo

Update or no candy for u

*gives u more candy

That as such a good chapter! Imma give you a COOKIE *gives cookie*

No problem ill give u some every time u update ^_^

Yay u updated *gives u candy

Love it so far !

This is so good so far! update soon pretty pleaseee!? ")

The first thing I noticed right away was the story layout. That's going to turn readers away right away, just for future reference. Instead of having words over a picture (the picture is distracting while trying to read), have the picture above the words, and the words under it. Another thing I noticed was how close the font color was to the background (of the font) color were. Having the colors that close together forces the readers to highlight the text or switch to the generic layout (which is incredibly boring, which is something we all know). Instead of using red on red, use a color that pops (for the font), but the readers can still read it.
Anyways, to the story. So far, it seems great. I'm excited for what's to come with little Frankie in a Catholic school.
I do hope Frank tells his parents soon enough, though. I doubt they'll get angry... At least his mother. Even though she is religious, she seems like a nice mom.
Update soon, s'il vous plait.

I love it update soon please ill give u candy or anything u like :D