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  • wish on a firefly

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    I laughed. I cried. And then I died...

    Boy, you have a knack for tugging at my heart strings, Jojo! I loved this story, even if I'm not a huge One Direction fan, I still liked this story. I feel bad for both Finley and Zayn, and yet I feel happy for both of them. The two of them were finally able to move on with their lives and I'm glad of that, too. :)

    You wrote this story quite well and I'm glad you asked me to read it because this is one of the best 1D fanfics I've ever read and I've only read about four of them. Thank you for such a great read. :D Arms

    -Your sissy,
    Hina <3
    February 25th, 2013 at 02:42am
  • raja sahara

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    oh man this ending. THIS STORY. I love the way you wrote it and I love how you wrote Finley and Zayn. It was cute and not cliche.
    Aleksander may sound cute but he's got nothing on Zayn.
    I cannot wait for the sequel!
    January 11th, 2013 at 02:27am
  • the_space_between

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    i am very happy with the way this ended! it wasn't super cliche, but it wasn't depressing either. This story was really good and i enjoyed seeing how things all played out! i can't wait for the sequel:)
    January 9th, 2013 at 01:14am
  • MoMo_92

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    It's sad I really wanted Finely to give him a second chance I mean honestly she should have went another way about the break up but I am excited about this sequel tho :)
    January 9th, 2013 at 01:08am
  • MoMo_92

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    I was not expecting them to break up, I'm really sad like really sad about this break up right now, I mean call me crazy but I would have voiced my opinion and decided to put our relationship on hold until Zayn got it together and I was able to trust him again and thn once I can I would resume our relationship but with a more trustworthy relationship u kno instead of breaking up when I kno it's not just goin to hurt me and him to the point of feeling my heart completely stop, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    January 5th, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • imacrimiminal

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    YOU BETTER BE MAKING A SEQUEL!!!!! THIS STORY IS TOO GOOD.
    January 5th, 2013 at 01:15pm
  • valleydream

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    Oh my god I can't believe she did that!
    I'm a bit angry but I sorta understand on how she stands on
    the situation.
    January 5th, 2013 at 08:19am
  • prettypsyche

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    I have a feeling this is a part of Finley's plan to get the boys talking.
    December 31st, 2012 at 03:29am
  • raja sahara

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    Oh wow I didn't expect that! I have no idea why Finley did that but oh man, it's gonna get better now. Please update soon!
    December 30th, 2012 at 05:12pm
  • Emmy2550

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    HOLY. CRAP!!!!!! That was sooo intense!
    December 30th, 2012 at 01:02am
  • MoMo_92

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    What the hell Finley, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 29th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • valleydream

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    Hope she doesn't get injuried :o
    But I wonder what her plan is
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:33pm
  • valleydream

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    Wow I wonder how the boys will feel about the issue of him leaving
    December 29th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • MoMo_92

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    Shit just got real, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 28th, 2012 at 06:50am
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    Perfect, as always!!!!
    December 28th, 2012 at 06:49am
  • hephaestus

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    @ pelican park.
    I'm from Iowa, so practically anywhere is more beautiful than here, so let me dream xD
    But woo!
    And yes, shit will be hitting the fan very soon.
    December 27th, 2012 at 08:40pm
  • raja sahara

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    oooooo shit's gonna hit the fan soon
    but I forgot to say, Arizona represent! You make it sound prettier than it actually is, I'm afraid.
    please update soon! :)
    December 27th, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • valleydream

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    I wonder what's going to go down
    December 23rd, 2012 at 05:28am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, man Zayn is not goin to be happy when he sees the guys it's goin to get ugly quick, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 22nd, 2012 at 09:36pm
  • hephaestus

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    @ WhoAreYouJudy
    Thanks!
    December 22nd, 2012 at 06:17am