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  • discoveringclouds

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    Another thing you could do is leave some advice or true story or good thing in the story or between the lines. That would make it amazing and really interesting to interpret. All the best!
    September 1st, 2012 at 06:56am
  • AndStuff

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    Thanks. I'm glad it was amusing, I will make that change. :)
    August 31st, 2012 at 11:12pm
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    You need to link the first paragraph to the second or at least to the third one so that your story that makes no sense still flows.

    I found this amusing. :P
    August 31st, 2012 at 08:43pm
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