My Madaleine Moment. - Comments

Love it! <3 please update soon :)

Finish this it's really good :)

I'm from comment swap! I liked it a lot and I understand the whole i-pad thing! I love that word, fiddly. But um yeah so like she said about a layout, it sometimes just makes it easier to read for me at least. Um but yeah so the story is great so far, but keep writing it even if you don't get a lot of people to like read it and be interested, keep writing it, because I know that me myself will write something and most of the people who read it will come wayyy after I've written like 10 chapters. So keep going, people who are interested will come soon.

@ ThatFreakInTheCorner
Thanks for the comment :) I try my best with my punctuation but I am writing on my iPod and it's a bit fiddly :/

I'm from comment swap! First of all, I absolutely love the plot so far, as well as Frank's somewhat bitter retelling of events. I'd suggest working on your punctuation and capitalization, just to make the story a bit easier to read. Adding a background would be nice as well, but the story itself is awesome. Keep writing. ^_^

@ Pinup_pansyx
Maybe I just want to generate interest in it and see how many people are interested.. But thanks

Ohh, I'm liking it so far. More soon? xo