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  • natzlovesyou

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    Ragamuffin!:
    Wow, esto fue sinceramente increible de leer, son pocas las veces que me encuentro con alguna pieza escrita en español.

    Tu uso de descripciones fue precioso. Me encanta como le das vida con las palabras que utilizaste.

    La verdad no vi error alguno en tu escrito, aunque si es dificil de leer cuando los parrafos se encuentran tan pegados uno del otro. Lo unico que recomiendo es darle doble "enter" al momento de separar los parrafos, asi los lectores no tendran problemas al leer.

    De nuevo, me encanto tu escrito.
    Awww gracias!
    Si, por alguna razon se me hace mucho mas dificil escribir en español que en ingles, aun cuando el español es mi lengua materna...Cosas de la vida. ¡Muchas gracias por los halagos!
    April 4th, 2009 at 07:42pm
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    Wow, esto fue sinceramente increible de leer, son pocas las veces que me encuentro con alguna pieza escrita en español.

    Tu uso de descripciones fue precioso. Me encanta como le das vida con las palabras que utilizaste.

    La verdad no vi error alguno en tu escrito, aunque si es dificil de leer cuando los parrafos se encuentran tan pegados uno del otro. Lo unico que recomiendo es darle doble "enter" al momento de separar los parrafos, asi los lectores no tendran problemas al leer.

    De nuevo, me encanto tu escrito.
    April 3rd, 2009 at 07:44am
  • natzlovesyou

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    Alex Avenge:
    I had to use a translator but I really liked the story.
    aww thank you for taking the time to readit :)
    June 7th, 2008 at 08:38pm
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    I had to use a translator but I really liked the story.
    June 7th, 2008 at 05:03am
  • natzlovesyou

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    nerdy_elisabeth:
    Book of the Rain?

    I take Spanish in school and so I got a few words and phrases from it.
    Yeah, it's The Book of Rain. My first language's Spanish so it was easy for me to write it. Did you like what you read?
    May 26th, 2008 at 12:06am
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    Book of the Rain?

    I take Spanish in school and so I got a few words and phrases from it.
    May 25th, 2008 at 07:50am
  • natzlovesyou

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    xAxBeautifulxLiarx:
    I just spent about an hour translating that sentence by sentence on google translate and I thought it was really amazing. Really amazing. :D
    awwww you're so cute! Thank you for caring that much!
    :cyber hugs you:
    You don't know how much that means to me!
    you turned my eyes to glass, you!
    May 25th, 2008 at 06:13am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    I just spent about an hour translating that sentence by sentence on google translate and I thought it was really amazing. Really amazing. :D
    May 25th, 2008 at 04:55am
  • natzlovesyou

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    lonex lore:
    hi natz, I made an account for me to read your stories...
    I really loved your story *<*

    um I think a suck a lot in writing, specially in english
    so maybe I'll upload some poems or wtv...
    awwww you're so cute gabbuuuu!!! thank youss!
    you don't suck at writing! seriously, you don't!
    Ooohh yes upload your poems!
    I'm gonna send you a friend invite.

    -xo!
    May 4th, 2008 at 04:36pm
  • lonex lore

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    hi natz, I made an account for me to read your stories...
    I really loved your story *<*

    um I think a suck a lot in writing, specially in english
    so maybe I'll upload some poems or wtv...
    May 4th, 2008 at 03:12am
  • natzlovesyou

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    You think there are things that need fixing up? Tell me what, please. My teachers didn't seem to mind at all, but they are stupid anyway. Spanish is my first language as well. I live in Colombia.
    Thank You.
    April 13th, 2008 at 12:49am
  • destroy.better

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    I likked good detail! Soe things could use a bit of fixing up.. but i bet you that you could spell better spanish than me ...and Its my first language! Like i said It was really good!
    April 12th, 2008 at 11:29pm
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