Aww!! Cute proposal! Short and coming straight to the point! :) the comparison "She wrote for a living while I smashed other men into glass for a little piece of rubber." must be my favorite line! Ahaha! :D
Love! :) I was waiting for the past to be, er, revealed..? :P I would have totally thought that Jordan was a creep! Demanding a girl to stay at his that loudly in a open coffee shop? XD