Haha this is fucking hilarious! Wow. I love how while John describes Jenny's characteristics, it has the pervy-boy scent tinted all over it. He drooling over this girl! You captured that very well. I can definitely feel his anxiety to get into this girl's pants. Jenny is a badass just for saying that she is sexier than all the other bitches in this club. I did not expect that to happen. I thought it'd be a typical scenario where the girl is like "fuck off" and walk away, or even playing hard to get. Jenny doesn't seem like it. She is straight up honest and actually gives in to John.
LOL Jared's irritation in the beginning is mighty sexy
LOL Jared's irritation in the beginning is mighty sexy