I thought the story had a pretty good concept of them going into a building and end up being caught in the path of a psychotic killer. There were some spelling and grammatical errors but it didn't deter from the story and I enjoyed reading it.
I'm sorry but making Gerard fuck Frank's neck wound was seriously sick. Eww, haha. That was a very interesting thing to put in there.
I liked how you put the nail gun in there and killing her like how the girl died in the picture. It was a very nice incorporation of it and I feel like it really went well with the story. I like how the girl had her own nail that she used to torture Frank with.
Haha thanks!