Cooks - Comments

An interesting start and quite fascinating. I wouldn't have known it was a Break Bad fic if not for comments (not being familiar with the name Heisenburg), but I was still drawn into the story. I like the concept and you've done a fantastic job of catching the feelings of the character. Excellent job, so far :) Keep it up!

Ok in all honesty i was searching jesse pinkman amd came across this story. I love breaking bad soo much its one of my favorite shows and i cant wait to hear more of this :)

Hey! I got your story in comment swap. And I have to say I don't know what this fan-fic is about so I can't say to much on it, sorry about that. But from what I read you did a wonderful job describing the thoughts and such, and Your a great writer. I hope you've written other story's that I'll maybe be able to understand better :P Keep up the good work!

hello, to be honest, I found your story via comment swap, but am glad i did. First off, I am not a Breaking Bad fan, so I was confused when I read the summary,but when I saw what the others said,I knew it would be good. :) That being said, I thought it was really good, even if you arent a fan, I felt like you didnt have to be a big fan to understand, or enjoy your story. That being said, right away I was pulled into your story and as interested, even if I wasnt a fan. I thought your story flowed really easily and was good, with only a few minor spelling problems, that someone already pointed out. Besides that,I really loved it,and am definettly interested in reading whatever else you publish. :)

Hi Kurtni! I got your story in the comment swap :D

First of all I'll say super quickly that I really love that I got a Breaking Bad related oneshot, it made my day.

I love the really simplistic layout, I really like the blue banner, I think it really stands out and adds a nice touch. The only thing I don't like is how the banner slightly hangs off to the right and sticks out a little, it's almost off-center.

The summary I think is good, I like the simplicity of it, I noticed that Ingredients is spelt wrong but that's the only thing that I caught :D

Something I noticed while reading the story itself is the chemical formula just slightly dips into the text, I personally don't mind it, but I thought I'd bring it to your attention.

Then the story itself I think is (again) beautiful in it's simplicity, I feel like you've caught a single moment in time with your character (Heisenberg) and the thoughts running through his head at the moment, I think it's really well written I didn't catch a single grammatical error other then in the summary.

Either way thought I think it was terrifically well written, I think you did a wonderful job writing this and I'm extremely happy with getting this in a comment swap