This story is really good. You can tell how much time and thought you put into it and I really love her as a character. Flawless. Regrettably, I would have liked to see her interact with the Alpha pack more. Flashbacks? But great job. I feel you've written everyone's character really well. Just beautiful story so far. Perfect. Please, update soon so I can read the flawlessness.
September 28th, 2012 at 05:55am