July 7th, 2013 at 11:01pm
Welcome to the Family! - Comments
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Love it! Please update....April 27th, 2013 at 10:24am
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loved it :)April 8th, 2013 at 10:23pm
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loved it :)April 8th, 2013 at 10:21pm
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@ xXcrazy-desiXx
haha April 8th, 2013 at 09:09am -
@ CrazyPebbles21
Lol :)April 8th, 2013 at 08:10am -
@ xXcrazy-desiXx
Thanks... I try
haha 
April 8th, 2013 at 06:36am -
@ LynShiningStar
lol yeah i guess she was.... thanks for the comment :)
@ TheLoneWolf1200
lol maybe April 8th, 2013 at 04:45am -
I wanna see Brittany get beat up again! =) Update soon!April 8th, 2013 at 03:51am
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Brittany was soo asking for it!!! But anyways... great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next update!April 8th, 2013 at 12:18am
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@ CrazyPebbles21
lol dude i loved your comment :)April 7th, 2013 at 11:01pm -
Update soon
Great chapter
I think she should get her money and leave
I thought it might of been Brian who was in the ally way but I don't know
Why does everyone hate her it's not her fault that Matt's her dad
Maybe Jamie needs to get out and kidnap her lol
Can't wait to find out what happensApril 7th, 2013 at 10:05pm -
I think the story line is good and you're developing your characters well. The only thing I would suggest is either getting an editor or just running through the first chapter again. Anyways, it's a great start!March 30th, 2013 at 02:05am
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I'm so glad you updated. I hate Brittany already! Grr! Matt's pissing me off as well. At least Val and Jimmy are nice. I want to see her beat the shit out of the Bimbo though! haha March 27th, 2013 at 03:56pm
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Update soon
Like to see what happensMarch 27th, 2013 at 12:31am -
Missed this story!! Can't wait for what happens next.March 26th, 2013 at 07:49pm
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@ shygirl1993 awe tank you
@ Legacey thank you so much I'm working on the chapter right now :)October 1st, 2012 at 04:31am -
wow this is really really good I can't wait for the next update but it could be longer lol
:)September 26th, 2012 at 11:56pm -
i like your story :) cant wait to read more
wish the chapters were longer lol
keep it up cant wait to read moreSeptember 4th, 2012 at 06:47am -
No problem you're a good writer. And like I said before I love your story lolSeptember 4th, 2012 at 04:39am
I love it
Amazing chapter