Aha. Yes! I love this. Except, it reminds me of Twilight a lot, so I'd keep in mind that. Your sentences flowed very well. Honestly I'm looking forward to the updates.
i like it... I got a new story that im writing... its called First Lady of The Japanese Mafia... i think you might like it.. Also, do you remmber the story i did... The sixteen and pregnant one... I did the sequel for that and now im working on the third book for it...
Except, it reminds me of Twilight a lot, so I'd keep in mind that. Your sentences flowed very well. Honestly I'm looking forward to the updates.