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    I just wish Dani would tell Josh about the epilepsy once and for all. It's making me all nervous because he's bound to have an episode when Josh's around sooner or later and poor Josh will have the scare of his life. And I don't know if he'll forgive Dani for hiding it...
    Poor Dani, too, though :'( cutie's all scared and stuff. It makes me sad. :'(

    This story is amazing! Update soon, please c:
    August 25th, 2013 at 03:17pm
  • fiction246

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    Oh Dani...and I feel bad for Josh. Hope they are going to be okay!!! Looking forward to more :)
    August 24th, 2013 at 02:55am
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    I'll say it again. Dan really needs to tell him the truth, before he has a seizure in front of josh and he doesn't know what to do!!
    August 14th, 2013 at 11:20am
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    ☺Cutest little story ❤
    August 12th, 2013 at 05:24am
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    Dani needs to tell him the truth!!! Josh seems like such a great guy :) looking forward to more!!
    August 8th, 2013 at 05:07am
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    Great chapter :) looking forward to more!!
    July 20th, 2013 at 11:37pm
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    Omigosh they're so freaking cute, and they fit each other perfectly :)
    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter *nudge nudge wink wink*
    <3
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:03am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Their date was adorable! And they kissed too! I'm so excited for them!
    June 20th, 2013 at 03:41am
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    Aww I loved the date!!! Damn waiter!!! But josh only had eyes for Dani!!! <3 can't wait for more :)
    June 19th, 2013 at 08:21am
  • silent bones ;

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    So happy right now!!! :D Go, Dani boy, do something for yourself! I can’t wait for Josh to say yes and stop being so sad. :D Update soon!
    May 31st, 2013 at 03:16pm
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    OMG!!! He asked Josh out!!!! XD :O
    May 24th, 2013 at 03:50am
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    Yayy!!!!
    May 24th, 2013 at 02:08am
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    I just found this tonight and I really love it :) I can't wait for more!!!
    May 23rd, 2013 at 03:37pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Well that got my heart racing! Oh my!
    May 21st, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • silent bones ;

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    They are so cute! I just wish Dani would tell Josh about his problem. His dad is right, not everyone will freak out and run because of it. It would be pretty stupid and Josh is definitely not an idiot I hope.
    Great chapter! I love this :D Update soon, please!
    May 9th, 2013 at 05:43pm
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    That was a close call!
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:45am
  • SamsJam

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    This story is great. I just found it in the new updates page thingy and it's really good, I read straight through it.

    The only criticism I have is be careful of tense changes. In Chapter Nine you swtich from past tense to present.

    Recommended and subscribed.
    May 8th, 2013 at 03:14pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    I'm so happy that this story is continuing. :3
    April 26th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • NothinNNomore

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    Lol this is funny because my I have a friend named Josh who has a best friend named Daniel :p
    April 25th, 2013 at 05:37am
  • silent bones ;

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    Poor Dani, having to turn down 'dates' and all. :c I really wish he would've just accepted to go out with Josh, but I get where's coming from - to an extent, of course.
    I am so excited so see how Josh's going to react to the whole epilepsy thing... There's something going on with him and that particular problem and I can't wait to find out about it!
    Update soon, I love this. :D
    March 6th, 2013 at 10:05pm
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