Iron Girl and the (Not Quite) Teen Avengers - Comments

@ Joey Tennant
Unfortunately, it has come to an end. But the Shawarma Scene and the first chapter of the sequel are both up if you wanna check them out :) Glad you liked it.

Dun dun dun.... That could turn out so dramatic.. Or just really scary for them... Anyways... Damn... That was freaking hot! Good chapters.

LOL!!! to Renavelia. All that was hilarious!!! Also, this was one hardcore chapter.... I loved it. Haha. Oh I love it all!!! I never wanna see it end

Okay, so I’m going to start from the end and work my way up. But first, let me just get one thing out of the way.

“HOT DAMN!”

Now, onward.

"We didn't use a condom." Her eyes focused on him. "I'm not on Birth Control. And we didn't use a condom." Clint gaped at her like a fish out of water.

Lmfao! Just picturing Clint with that look upon his face is priceless. I mean really! Doesn’t he realize how babies are made? If not, he does now. Haha XD That is if she becomes pregnant after that little steam session. *Wink, wink.*

"I require you....In an...intimate way. The most intimate of ways." "Are you trying to say...You wanna have sex with me?"

“Dylan can I sex you up?” “Why yes Thor you can.” Lol. You are just too funny. Which for you may very well be a curse because now I refuse to let you go without a sequel. XP Oh and by the way, Thor licking the chocolate off of her fingers…let me just repeat myself. HOT DAMN!

When she couldn't concentrate on the words, she looked up again, at her door. ".......Well.....Damn!" Yeah Angel, that’s what I said. “If you want my body and you think I’m sexy, come on sugar let me know.” Why yes Bruce, I do want your sexy body.

Hm…Steve and Keller. Steve, Steve, Steve, Keller. “Steve grow a pair and lose that timidness. We want to see some lovin’!” They are going to make great parents for Gabrielle. She’s such an intuitive young girl. Even at five she knows what love is. Haha, sneaky fox.

"Marry me?" "Okay," Tara murmured sleepily. Clint smiled and lay his hand on her hip, thumb stroking the skin gently. He'd ask again when she woke up. Yeah you better do that Clint or else Tara will most likely not remember on account of you rocking her world. Or bed if you want to get technical. Lmfao! ;P Seriously, you can make me scream anytime you want, Clint. (Sorry, couldn’t help myself to that one.)

Girl, the journey was long and thought out, but alas it must come to an end. It’s a sad sight indeed. Freakin’ A! Damn this was a great story. Me likey! XD Me likey lots! Yeah, I went there.

Clint...oh Clint. Tara is lucky to have him. I really was surprised at how frisky he was. Haha, nonetheless he is still hot. I love how shy Angel was when Bruce was naked. I pictured that and couldn't help but laugh. XD Keller's power is so damn awesome. Again I pictured Johnny Storm when she shielded that girl from the car blast. Dylan and Thor make a great team. Oh and I loved the part where Angel helped Bruce/Hulk with the giant worm/turtle thing.

Sad that Phil still died. I hated that in the movie. He was a great character. He was like the glue to all of the movies. :( Sad to see him go.

I loved Tony when he said "Make a move, Reindeer Games." in the movie. It was just too hilarious. Add you added that in the story made it so sweet. XP The adopted thing gets me everytime. I know it is bad to say Loki is evil because he is adopted but the way Thor says it in the movie just cracks me up. Dylan has complete control of the god. It's cute. ;)

That fight scene between Tara and Clint had me wincing when she knocked his head against the rail. I had a headache and reading that part seemed to make it worse. Lol. Yeah, Loki is like a bag full of kittens. You can definitely smell the crazy coming from him. Lmao! XD

"From outer space. An Alien?"

"No." Bruce shook his head. A small smirk worked its way onto his girlfrie- Angel's face.

"Then son...You've got a condition."
LMFAO! Best part of the movie by far. I loved that you added that into your story as well. Update soon or else I'm afraid I'll going into withdrawl.

Haha.. I love that line: "if it's all the same to you, I'll have that drink now" one of my favourites xD and damn.. You update fast.. Simply wow.. And awesome!! I love this! Good chapters and can't wait for more.

Just read it. I love it!! Amazing, really.

Yes, two lovely chapters. I like how you had small flicks of fire behind Keller as she walked towards Steve. :) I could see that clearly. Keller reminded me of that one pyro from X-Men when she nervously flicked her lighter open and close. Sweet!

Poor Tara. I hope she gets Clint back soon. Oh, but I can't wait to see those two go at it if you choose to write it like that. In the movie it was Natsha who brought Clint back, but I'll understand if you choose Tara to be instead. >o<

Angel and Bruce are so cute together. She keeps him in line and it is adorable. Also, I cannot wait for Thor to come back for Dylan and Keller to get with Steve. XP Ah...I really love reading this story. Update soon please.

And the adventure continues! This is so awesome already. I can't wait for more. Good chapters.

And so the adventure begins.. The introduction fase is over and things are getting a move on.. Hmm.. It is times like these I'm glad I have avengers on DVD. Because I feel like watching it again after reading this x)

Hmm.. I feel bad for Tara. It must be hard to watch someone you care so much for be put in a trance and all that follows it.. Hmm.. And I like that angle and Bruce are all lovey dovey like (at least a little) still or maybe rather at last.. Hmm...

Good chapter.

You know...I really want to go re-watch the Avengers now. :P I find it sad that Tara had to watch Loki capture Hawkeye without her being able to do anything about it. Also, with Hawkeye replying to Tara's comment about the assholes. Lol. Funny.

Yes! Hulky has his Angel back. Yeah, Widow did start pretty darn young. Love the idea of Angel having white wings this time. Goes with her name.

Lol, I laughed at the 'puny Banner' part. As I'm commenting, there is a Hulk advertisment right above this box. :)

Anyway, I will have to agree with Dylan that Betty is bitchy. Hulk would have crushed her bones to dust. ;}

Oooh, will there be something on the forth member? Keller? Or will it go straight to the four POVs as a whole...like just pure 3rd person?

Haha.. Puny banner loves angle too xD or whatever it said like that.. Banner did need a little awakening for not believing her or for simply believing bitchy ex over her... Hmm... Wondering what will be next now the team is assembled.. Maybe that whole name change thing? Or is that later? Hmmm.. Good chapters.

That bitch. Pardon my french, but I would seriously like to slap the hair off of Betty's face right now. Lol. I feel slightly disappointed that Bruce would even believe Betty over Angel even for a moment. I cannot wait to read about Angel and Bruce's confronmation and how they will react to one another. :)

@ Renavelia
No your right, Betty is with some head shrink in this..

Awww! Hulk's angle! That's so cute.. Hmm.. What was Betty thinking when she slapped the Hulk? That's just stupid.. Hmm.. Betty is being selfish with her jealousy.. I'm guessing she still somewhere feels something. But still.. She's with shrink guy now. Hmm... Good chapter.

Awe, Hulk's Angel. :) I love this chapter too. It's so full of action and the imagry is great. I can't believe that...what's her name? The Ross chick...Betty? Slapped Hulk. Seriously, what was she thinking. Haha. Anyways, I can't wait to read what's next. This is so awesome.

XD

Oh yeah! The Hulk may have staked his claim, but Brucey likes her like that too. Lmao! Betty is so jealous. She should be. She's the one who left him in the first place though. Well...that's what you wrote...I think...or have I been reading too many Bruce Banner fics? Haha, probably. My bad. Anyways, I cannot wait to see what happens next.

So new to the story and so far I'm loving it. It's an awesome story.

I like the writing style, how well written it is and it's form.. Well at least on my phone. I like the new additions and the whole concept of "teen advengers" or "avengers team two" or whatever they end up being called. I like how the characters interact with one another and how the known characters are portrayed.

This has a good time line so far, it's believable, the event line is at a good pace... Hmm.. The romance and action is evenly levelled out, which is pretty fantastic.. Hmm... I think that was all I had to say for now. Good story so far, I'm subscribing and looking forward to more.

Ooo la la. Haha, yeah, I can already tell that Angel and Bruce are going to be my favorite power couple. I don't know why, but they are. Okay, quick question. Is the Hulk being portrayed as Mark Ruffalo or Edward Norton for this story? That way I'll have a better picture to run by. ;)

I love this chapter. I know I keep saying that, but hey it's hard not to love any of these chapters. I have no problem saying that I'll most likely love the next chapter as well. *Shrugs* By the way, I am more excited for an update now more than ever.

im seriously liking this story

*Gasp!*
Seriously?! Are you seriously leaving me off with a cliffhanger? Noooo!

I feel so bad for the treatment Angel has gone through in the past with her parents and Stryker. I hope she'll be able to get revenge or something. I mean...damn. Oh Wade saved her. :) I cannot wait until Angel tells how she knows Banner. XD