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  • Never_fLynch

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    Yay! You decided to update! Another good chapter. As far as ideas...it needs a crisis. Like his hands getting bad or someone figuring out the lie. Something along those lines. Either way keep it up. Thanks for persevering.
    March 26th, 2013 at 08:32pm
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    This is super intriguing. I definitely think you should finish it. I know it's been a while, but hey, why not? It's really well written.
    January 14th, 2013 at 03:15am
  • Weby113

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    Interesting idea
    September 3rd, 2012 at 07:30pm
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