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i'm from the comment swap! this story's interesting, i've already read parts of the prequel so it wasnt too hard to follow. you're still great at description and all of your sentences flow really well. the only mistake again that i noticed was capitalizing "He" after dialogue, it should be lowercase. good luck with your writing!

Found this through comment swap, and can I just say I think your writing is beautiful. It flows really nicely and the description is lovely. I also really love the way you started it, it was, quite honeslty, captivating.

Only thing is, I struggled to follow it, and that's probably because this is a sequel and I'm too lazy to actually go read the prequel.

@ carriesometimes
Thank you doll! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment/subscription! I will be updating more soon.

xoxo.

First off,I found your story through comment swap,but as soon as I saw your title, I started singing the song,and was really hoping it was the one by Mayday Parade. I was so happy when I saw that it was! First off, I love your backround,but besides that, I thought your story was really good. It flowed nicely,and I was pulled in right away at how interesting the first few sentences were. I already subscribed and I can't wait to read more. :)

@ Brian Dales
Thanks doll! :)

al;ksdjdjs. LOVE IT! keep it up doll :)