Take Me Out (on Tour) - Comments

yay this is fab already can't wait for me because Sean is so akfgadhgf and Snoz is all slkgfsadhgfk and Matt is also aslgfasdjlhgf you'll soon realise that my comments don't make sense.

This is great so far aw c:

Eeeeeeek! I love this :D
It sounds amazing already. I can't wait for more.
Oh, and Matt's great :')

Ahha, I think this is absolutely brilliant c: It's really funny, but not in a stupid way, aaaaaaaaand I love it already. Okay, cooooool. more pls?

@ Lee Gaze
aw thank you c: I'm completely new to the site, and yeah I basically didn't even check my story after I posted it so, uh, I see exactly what you mean x3 Thank you loads though :)

The storyline is interesting (as far as Smatkins storylines go lulz, [insert drummer joke here]) this story has a lot of potential, I like the humor!
But fix the spacing, it's hard to read and it puts off people ;)
Also if you want more people to read your stories, comment on the stories yo read and the people will check out the things you write!

anyways *subscribes*