Gladiator Love - Comments

I hope update soon
I want to see what happens

Comment swap:
okay, to start the layout kind of scared me and the red-on-black isn't really easy on the eyes. I really love your idea and plot line though. i'm actually writing a story about a slave right now, but in a much later time. i love your writing style and the story! great job!

Now my Spartacus story doesn't feel alone on this website, lol!
Anyway, I really like this so far and I am subscribing for sure. It's funny that we're writing about the same subject in such distinct ways :)

good job! :) I think you did I really good job in describing everything and i like the way i felt that i was apart of what was going on! I will say that i don't like this lay out very much but that could just be me.

I like the way it starts out, the weather of it being hot and the way it fell nicely into a setting was extremely well written. The brother and sister and then how she's taken away. The detailing is great, and the story flows really well. The layout is fitting and the red on black makes it easier to read. You have a wonderful story going, and I hope you keep it up!

@ M Shadows's Girl
Still have to type it up 2 pages down one to go lol

Yo when am i going get read chapter too