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  • Join the Masquerade

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    @ kalajmic
    Oh! I completely forgot about that Facepalm
    I'll put that in my to do list. I love your stories tehe
    May 4th, 2016 at 08:20pm
  • mr. twin sister

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    @ Join the Masquerade
    In the stories category, there's a comment swap button I've been commenting on people's stories for fun :^)

    I'd like a comment on 'Where Do We Belong ' whenever you have time! I didn't even know this was your story omg I feel like I stalk your profile all the time!
    May 4th, 2016 at 07:41pm
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    @ kalajmic
    What's the comment swap from? Think And what would you like me to comment on? Mr. Green

    I honestly don't remember much of this story... Wrote it a long while ago. But thank you :) And I'll have to keep an eye on my tenses.
    May 4th, 2016 at 06:36pm
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    This is actually a very cute story. I enjoy Tom and Annette especially they way they talk to each other. I think Annette is a very special character to offer up her place when she herself is struggling with her own life.

    I also find the first chapter charming but you do switch from past tense to present a lot and I think the writing would be more effective if you stuck with one. Also there are a few things that should be re-worded or taken out to make paragraphs flow smoothly bit other than that, nice buildup and character building.
    May 4th, 2016 at 06:20pm
  • AshleyJinxxBiersack

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    Internally screaming at the level of cute between Tom and Annette. Omfg.
    I'm wondering why I never found this story sooner ;o
    It's awesome :')
    Every time something to do with Laura was in a chapter, I sat muttering 'bitch' under my breath over and over again. She's such a bitch to him. Ugh.
    Will you update this whenever you can, please? I wanna see more cute stuff o: <3
    February 2nd, 2014 at 06:58pm
  • DaveGrohlFix

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    I love this story so much! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon! :D
    September 4th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • SufferingSweetSorrow

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    I just read all the chapters in less than an hour. I never giggled so much! I love this story. ooh I hope you update soon!!!
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:01am
  • DreamtOfYou

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    I MUST KNOW MORE! I go crazy during the falling-in-love stage between characters because I just want them to hurry up! lol :) great story!
    May 16th, 2013 at 12:25am
  • cosmic pixel

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    Oh my God. FUCKING UPDATE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. though I kinda know/hope what's going to happen next
    May 15th, 2013 at 10:19pm
  • AnyaMai

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    I just found this o.o what.
    awh bless tom
    December 3rd, 2012 at 02:32am
  • GoingNoWhere

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    Half naked tom - yum
    November 21st, 2012 at 08:07am
  • Reddragon

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    Ohhh Christmas with Tom, yusss!
    November 21st, 2012 at 06:22am
  • Reddragon

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    Aww Annette's so nice, offering her place to him when she's got her own troubles. This is the girl you need Tom!
    November 14th, 2012 at 01:19am
  • BrokenWords

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    This is amazing. I just love Annette's character she seems so inviting. Both she an Tom would make a great pair.
    November 10th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • GoingNoWhere

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    Oh it's so on... with Tom and Annette that is...
    November 2nd, 2012 at 05:04am
  • Reddragon

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    Ohh a little bit of turbulence in her life. Now it's Tom's turn to comfort her. I like ^^
    November 2nd, 2012 at 12:43am
  • jskars

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    YES! THEY ARE SO OVER!
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:19am
  • Reddragon

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    Ohh snap. I hate how cold Laura can be, how she doesn't care about anyone's feelings but her own. Tom you'll be better off with Annette!
    October 15th, 2012 at 01:51am
  • reindeergames19

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    Poor Tom :( but on the bright side, now he can be with Annette!!!
    October 14th, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • Join the Masquerade

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    @ DarkKnightAddict
    Hahahaha ;)
    October 14th, 2012 at 02:42pm
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