Expectations - Comments

@ kalajmic
Oh! I completely forgot about that
I'll put that in my to do list. I love your stories

@ Join the Masquerade
In the stories category, there's a comment swap button I've been commenting on people's stories for fun :^)

I'd like a comment on 'Where Do We Belong ' whenever you have time! I didn't even know this was your story omg I feel like I stalk your profile all the time!

@ kalajmic
What's the comment swap from? And what would you like me to comment on?

I honestly don't remember much of this story... Wrote it a long while ago. But thank you :) And I'll have to keep an eye on my tenses.

Comment Swap:

This is actually a very cute story. I enjoy Tom and Annette especially they way they talk to each other. I think Annette is a very special character to offer up her place when she herself is struggling with her own life.

I also find the first chapter charming but you do switch from past tense to present a lot and I think the writing would be more effective if you stuck with one. Also there are a few things that should be re-worded or taken out to make paragraphs flow smoothly bit other than that, nice buildup and character building.

Internally screaming at the level of cute between Tom and Annette. Omfg.
I'm wondering why I never found this story sooner ;o
It's awesome :')
Every time something to do with Laura was in a chapter, I sat muttering 'bitch' under my breath over and over again. She's such a bitch to him. Ugh.
Will you update this whenever you can, please? I wanna see more cute stuff o: <3

I love this story so much! I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon! :D

I just read all the chapters in less than an hour. I never giggled so much! I love this story. ooh I hope you update soon!!!

I MUST KNOW MORE! I go crazy during the falling-in-love stage between characters because I just want them to hurry up! lol :) great story!

Oh my God. FUCKING UPDATE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. though I kinda know/hope what's going to happen next

I just found this o.o what.
awh bless tom

Half naked tom - yum

Ohhh Christmas with Tom, yusss!

Aww Annette's so nice, offering her place to him when she's got her own troubles. This is the girl you need Tom!

This is amazing. I just love Annette's character she seems so inviting. Both she an Tom would make a great pair.

Oh it's so on... with Tom and Annette that is...

Ohh a little bit of turbulence in her life. Now it's Tom's turn to comfort her. I like ^^

YES! THEY ARE SO OVER!

Ohh snap. I hate how cold Laura can be, how she doesn't care about anyone's feelings but her own. Tom you'll be better off with Annette!

Poor Tom :( but on the bright side, now he can be with Annette!!!

@ DarkKnightAddict
Hahahaha ;)