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Emm...excuse me? Where the hell has this story been for my whole life? Gah! It's amazing, I just want to push the two of them together. Having a Fred story myself, I just love anything to do with him but Fred and Hermione is something I would never have put together...yet the way you write them and those freaking adorable letter , it's just so natural and heartbreaking I want to get sick!

Your writing is incredible and I like that even though your chapters are short( which isn't a bad thing, fyi), you just sucked me right into this world of Hermione and Fred and it's so believable. I also love how you call Harry her brother in the summary, that's really sweet and also something I think Hermione always thought of Harry as.

I love it and am recommending and subscribing right now!

Hm, I've never really thought of Hermione and Fred. So this will be a very interesting read. Your writing seriously just makes my insides melt. The flow of your stories is simply magnificent. I'm so jealous, and in awe at the same time. How do you not have things published. It's so late, so I could only read a few chapters.

So, onto the things that I really loved. I loved how you patched things with the argument with the Yule Ball, and with Fred being the nice one who went after and checked on Hermione. It's just so cute and sweet.

And, is it normal that I went into a frenzy when I read about how Fred misses her bushy hair. Just D'aw.

OHMYGOD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE MY HEART OW.
I totally ship them just saying.
This is so well-written. Your descriptions are perfect and your characters are (mostly) canon (ps Harry Potter is my life bonus points for you) and honestly I love everything about this. There's nothing to criticize. Really really great job :) Recommended and subscribed! <3

Dude, I think I'm gonna cry. I'm just now reading this, I'm sorry, but I'm glad I waited because this was just beautiful. Now, you need to update woman!!!! I demand to read more lol I'm so intimidating, I know :) But seriously, update soon pretty please!! :)

This was adorably cute, and I think it is very original. I love how you had Fred confess to her, and I thought it was very original for you to have it at the Yule Ball. Your writing is absolutely beautiful, and I like it a lot. I love this story a lot, though it is only in three chapters. I can't wait for the next few chapters and good luck!

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I was so excited to see this was a Hermione/Fred story! I love both characters but have never seen them put together. The Yule Ball twist is an interesting one.
Some issues I do have are Fred's letter being addressed to 'Mia' without that being explained and the actual letter itself seeming a bit out of character for one of the twins. I can't imagine either of them saying any of those things without ten jokes in between--but that's my opinion.
Aside from HP concerns, your writing is rather good, though occasionally you try to shove a few too many words into a sentence that don't need to be there. Be careful of that, and pare down what isn't necessary, as wordiness often leads to confusion.
All in all, a sweet little story! Keep it up!

I love this fan fiction a lot and not just because I love the Harry Potter series, but because you are a fantastic writer that deserves no less than to be a famous author one day. I usually hate fan fictions because to me most of them are stupid and there are only few I have read that is worth reading, and this one is one of them. I have a book called Ignacio and I would be honored if you read it. Yours truely - k9master2

So I love this and I think you should update soon. :)

SO PERFECTTTTTTT!

hey I love Harry Potter!!
I just have to say I love where you're going with the story! PLEAZE include Malfoy somewhere in the story. I love the description and it's interesting adding letters within the plot. Oh I'll spread the word of your story my friends love Harry Potter lol

Hello :D you asked me to comment on any story of yours (and this is coming from my week-old blog entry -- sorry for the delay, this was the only next available free time slot that I had).

I'm in an absolute Harry Potter obsession right now so I just has to read this. I wish it had more chapters though because I think you've got a solid plot line. There are a couple grammar problems here and there. I also found that the incomplete sentences in the last paragraph of the first chapter were a little difficult to read. It seems as though you were utilizing those stop-and-go sentences as a way to express the way she was thinking, and that's cool, but I think it could be touched up in a couple areas.

Still a great story regardless. I wish you had continued this.

Crying because Harry Potter has been my love since the second grade when I started reading the books. I died when the last movie ended because idk he's always just been my boy. I used to carry the books around with me like teddy bears because I was that cool.

And this sounds pretty legit, unlike some Harry Potter fanfics that are like "Oh so this is Harry's long-lost sister and Sirius's daughter and it takes place around the sixth book but Sirius didn't die yet" and just basically end up getting all the info wrong. So this is perf and Fred and George are just so amazing, oh God I miss Fred</3

I'm gonna read the rest now :D

First off, I love that this a Harry Potter fan fiction. I’ve been a fan of Harry Potter since I was a small girl. The movies always captivated and spell bound me. Your story has also spell bound me. I’ve never thought of Hermione and Fred as a couple, strangely though I can get used to the idea. Your writing style is so clean, precise and beautiful. I am definitely subscribing. You’ve gained another reader and trust me when I say I’m picky with fan fictions from movies. Something about this fan fiction spoke to me. I suppose it’s because your writing sounds very knowledgeable. What I mean to say is that you seem to know your Harry Potter information. I’m glad, because there always those fan fictions that sound unbelievable because the writer doesn’t know a thing about the story they’re trying to write about. I’m curious now as to how your other stories are. I’m going to check them out, because you have a magnificent skill for writing. Don’t listen to other people if they say you aren’t capable of writing because I’m letting you know you can. The way you write is magical, as if you wove something supernatural into your story. I can’t wait for more!

I love Harry Potter, and Fred/George are my favourite characters, so you win already, haha! This is one of the cutest stories I have read in a while, and I really liekt he idea of Fred and Hermione as a couple. Having the letters at the end of the chapte3rs is quite a lovely touch, and seriously, I'm practically sat here squeeing. I love your writing style, your sentences flow really well together, and you've got a particular gift with description.

Keep it up, this is a lovely little story! :)

Oh my! I've never seen a Harry Potter fan-fiction with Hermione and Fred. Glad to know these exist, though.

Adding onto that, it's a very good first. Everything is pretty much on point. It was remarkably adorable and sweet. By the end of the first chapter it captivated my heart and pretty much making my heart sing at how amazing it is!

Please, keep writing this, it's too amazing not to.

This is so unbelievably sweet. The PS in the first chapter made me 'aw' out loud I agree with Immy_Love_Adub, the way you present their situation as so terrible and have the letters brighten up their days, I just can't. It is so adorable.

I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

I like this! The layout is really pretty, but also very unique. I haven't seen one like it. It's elegant, and I like the background pattern with the red floral sidebars. It looks great!
Your grammar and spelling was flawless. I don't think I saw more than one mistake - if any! Your writing is just beautiful. The description used in this was amazing. There's not much else I can say - you presented this story in a very sophisticated writing style, and it's very interesting. I can't wait to read more! <3

Yes! You updated <3 More soon, pleaseeeeee?

Hi! Now that we're friends I noticed that you updated this, and I love it to bits! I have a weakness for HP fanfics :D I'm subscribed, so update soon! I'm excited for this :D

You updated!!!! Ahhhh!! Lol this was amazing Sree, I really love this story because it's so different from other HP fanfics Ive read :) Update soon please :)