C'est de l'amour - Comments

If I may make a small comment:
just watch the word use because it can be a tad confusing and kinda halt the story.

"It's not very joyful, so I guess you can see why Ariel is so captivated to the enthusiastic lives of her friends."
You can't say joyful here because you can only BE joyful, you can't have situation that is joyful (idk if that explains it correctly) or like when you said female figurines I was a little confused as i was when you sai d"From those words alone spoken by the rebellious Ariel, a corruption of words fleeted into the air with an aurora of hatred that convicted the air. To the red-head, it was almost too shabby to even endeavor breathing without remarking against everyone else's words."

Small things really and not that i'm even a good author I just have done quite a bit of editing and reading so it helps to just reread (even out loud) and see how it sounds. Otherwise (back to the good stuff now) as I've said I really do love this story I love the fairytale-esque language and the mystical feel i has. Can't wait for the next update, hope it's soon. :)

Hi, thought I let you know that you are in my recommendation list (:

You're not giving anything away lol! This is so nicely set up I'm hooked. So it is going to be following the charaers lives paralelly or are they gonna meet up, or wnd see ;)

Yeah, I'm gonna have to agree with, Mulan and Rapunzel are my faves, though I do love Ariel as well (and hnnnnnnnng Prince Eric). I'm so excited! Poor Mulan :(

This is really cool spin on the stories! Mulan is no doubt my favorite (besides tangled) so I'm really excited to read more from Mulans story! Keen em' coming :)

Oh I like this! I'm curious as to how Ariel and Mulan are gonna play out. I'm excited :)

ahhh i can't wait to see what happens! i hope you bring out the Disney characters sense of curiosity in this story.. i think it would make her great.

Didn't dissapoint, you have a circus in there and "summers at the cape" can't wait for more, and Little Mermaid is definately one of my favorites.

Letme just say I've never met a disney movie I don't like. I've owned damn near all of them and still have the cassettes in *MINT* condition. This excites me and I can't wait for more!!!

This sounds so exciting and interesting! I'm subscribed :)