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  • The.Secret.Keeper

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    I did. :)
    Aaaand I do. It's just a Facebook page at the moment. This picture is on there but, it's very edited. My page is called Briongloid Alainn Photography. Sadly I haven't had any time to post much. :(
    And you're welcome. :)
    October 10th, 2012 at 05:04pm
  • SevenSinz

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    @ The.Secret.Keeper
    You took the picture!? I love it so much no joke!!!! Do you have a place where you post your pictures? I'd love to put a link up for you. Thank you, by the way.
    October 7th, 2012 at 03:33am
  • The.Secret.Keeper

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    I'm at a loss of words. This is great. I'm seriously ecstatic that my picture inspired you and you have impeccable writing skills! ^-^ Congratulations on first place!
    October 4th, 2012 at 01:56am
  • Katie Mosing

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    This piece is really well done. The writing paints a vivid picture in my head and portrays the story's emotions so well. I could feel the character's pain, and I think it is something that a lot of people could relate to. I noticed only a few grammatical errors, so I think the piece was very well done!

    Good luck and thank you for entering Mibba's Photography contest!
    September 18th, 2012 at 06:54pm
  • SevenSinz

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    @ daisyfairy
    Thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it <3
    September 17th, 2012 at 08:44pm
  • daisyfairy

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    This is beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it, and I think you have a really lovely way of writing. The story fits well with the image, and the tale is one that definitely made me tear up.

    The line that stuck out the most to me was, "And you had said the only thing that could ever change your plans is if you found something you loved more."

    Thanks for entered Mibba's photo contest, and good luck.
    September 17th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • eyesonfirex

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    Oh I would love that! You're an amazing writer.
    September 17th, 2012 at 01:43pm
  • SevenSinz

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    @ Emmelz Liebe
    Wow, that's exactly what I was going for, I can't believe you actually felt that. This is one of my first short stories ever...
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • SevenSinz

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    @ eyesonfirex It was actually a short story, but if you want I could work on what happened up to that point. I would love doing it :) And I'm glad you liked it, it really means a lot that people actually like it.
    September 17th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • eyesonfirex

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    This is amazing. I got so lost in the words and I felt like I was really there. Update this soon! I'm excited to see where this goes.
    September 16th, 2012 at 06:02pm
  • kim wonshik.

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    Wow, this was really deep, and I enjoyed reading it very much so.
    When I was reading, I just... became all numb, I guess. I don't know, but it made me feel weird (but it's a good weird since your writing was able to do that to me haha). It was this same feeling that made me want to comment. (:
    But yeah, this was nicely done and you did a great job on it!
    September 16th, 2012 at 05:13pm