My Sweetest Addiction - Comments

THAT'S WHERE YOU END IT!?!?!?!?!?!?
ok, so.....so much stuff.
I felt like I was graduating with you and all your friends, the emotions were so raw and Wrath.....of course Wrath would be the perfect boyfriend to his face and then sleep around behind his back. :/ - does that look like a happy face? lol:D
He's a dick. But I've said that numerous times^.^
I've given up, ONCE AIDEN GETS BETTER HE DOES NEED TO GET WITH MUSE:P
and he will get better:P
I know he will!!

Awh. Such a sad ending. : ( Loved it either way though.

fk it.
Just go be happy with Muse!!!!!!
:P
Your friends notice, you should notice:P

d'awww last concert
and of course wrath didn't know about it cuz he's a butt. as per usual.
and lol, I see the line:D
red roses! - my favorite too:)

WRATH.

just.

ugh.

I want him gone. Like living in a rain gutter wiht just barely enough room for his mouth to get a breathful of air and he has to live there. Forever. He acts like it's Aiden's fault for not 'only looking at him' while he's getting ready to push him around.....don't get me started boy.

and I am liking Muse more:P You're writing's making me not dislike her so much lol

I still hate wrath.

Nicole has things right. Sooooo right.

I'm still iffy on Must:P because what Nicole said is right:P

shocker shocker Wrath was a dick again:P lol, major sarcasm

and what the fuck, you know about everything and you're just going to watch Aiden hurt himself!?!??!?!?!?!?! bitch please I want to punch you out, legit because then he has a nightmare and you're all 'baby are you alright?' like you have any right to call him baby

anywho.....as much as i hate to admit it, I think.......................................I prefer Muse to Wrath now:P

I just want to say, awesome. I loved the update. I actually appreciate the author's note explaining that. I wasn't questioning his transition to much yet, but i'm sure I would have eventually, lol. Now I know not to. : ) Loved the update as per usual though.

I don't think there's anyone else missing other than Aiden and his family, but tell me if I do because I did read it late last night:D

family - pretty mucha ll I can say is that I'm glad Aiden got out when his mom started being abusive and not a while after

Aiden - There was this one part that described it perfectly, she was talking to one of his school friends and the girl was saying how he blames everything on himself and that is so true it makes me sad. For everything that happens, Aiden's always saying that it's because he's not good enough or that he's the reason why these relationships went to shit. well he's so wrong. that girl was right. It's everyone around Aiden's fault and because of the household he grew up in, he always thought everything was his fault, and I think Adrian is so sweet and sad that that had to happen but it's life and screw the guy who pushed her off his lap. he's another buttface. but yeah, I think Muse is sapping love from Aiden even when she's with someone else and not really having the chance to let Aiden be independent of her and try to have a relationship without her being somehwere in the shadows. I think Aiden wants to be a whore as he said, so he can just not bother with love but he wants to be loved and I think he will be once the right person comes along:D

Jack - at one point i feel like he's a home wrecker. yeah, jay and Aiden may not have made it but he came in there and screwed it all up, so what if he apologized the first time, he didn't seem to care every time after that.

oh and by the way having Jack and Aiden having a bday party together pissed me off. Aiden deserves his own party if nothing else, even if he didn't want it. And Jay's ipod was just because he felt guilty because he's an asshole. :D

Jay - I kinda fucking hate him. Scratch that, I DO. He was a complete asshat, feeling pathetic and trying to kill himself after he got rejected NOT TO MENTION THAT HE REJECTED AIDEN LIKE A SECOND BEFORE HE DID THAT, and then agrees to go out even though he knows he doesn't care about Aiden as much as Aiden cares about him I do so believe and then he meets this new guy and drops Aiden like he's nothing, but you know what, it would have been beetter if he did drop him because what he did was way worse, keeping him strung along while he screwed Jack over the phone and messed around with him, it's not nice and he pisses me off just about as badly as Wrath does if not more. He was wrong and how dare he come up to Aiden and be all like 'hey wtf why are you ignoring me' um screw you bud, you're the dumb fker who was a dick to him, you could have at least broken up with him legitely. he pisses me off to no end

Micah- he's awesome and sounds like a really awesome dad, always supportive and always knowing the right thing to say, understanding Aiden on a truly fatherly level

Derek- he's not that much present in the story but Ig et this silent supportive vibe from him and he's a good guy because he's with Micah:P:D

School friends-(lol, just kind of grouping them all together) they seen like they are supportive, but like they want a little bit more from Aiden then they give to him but they still are supportive and mean well

Slash- I love him, he's sort of like an older brother to Aiden and is always there for him. He's that older brother kind of guy who's like 'yeah I'll help you when you need it but I'll give you space so you can come to me'. I love how he lets Aiden cry to him and just holds him an lets him vent what he's going through. He seems like one of the only people who is genuine to Aiden. Also it's awesome how he tries to protect Aiden from Wrath when he's off being a whore:P :D

I'll do Cheyenne next I guess,
She's pretty self explanitory-just a whore who wants to screw around but it feels like she's just doing the same thing that muse kind of does, using Aiden to her own means and not really caring much about what he feels about what they are doing. He even explained exactly what he wants out of a relationship and she's just like 'yeah okay whatever'...that's just how I feel about her

Next is Muse,
I like the relationship that Aiden and her have how they can always be there for one another and support one another regardless of what it is about but I feel like they need definition to it; like they need to say just friends, always friends or actually date because Muse also is always tempting Aidena and kind of pulling him into doing things, knowing that she shouldn't but she does it anyway even when it ruins things for Aiden. LIke I get that he wants it too but I feel like she uses their friendship/relationship to get what she wants when she wants it...that's just kind of the vibe I get from her. Like she loves him, really but she loves him more when she wants something from him, if that makes any sense.

Ok so Im on my phone but Ill go character by character so I dont loose the whole thing if it refreshes lol.

First is Wrath,
What the fuck. He is a grade A dick and Im sorry if he has reasons or whatever, but he freaking tried to push it off on Aiden and be all like oh you didnt ask. If you wanted to stay with him then do it darn it dont be a buttface and whine that he never asked when Aiden just wanted the best for him. And then they go back to it like nothing happened and im like Wrath, you piss me off like hell:P you need to leave and stay gone, or never leave Aidens side because damnit he STILL loves you. It seems lke regardless of what he says, he needs to make up his mind because he doesnt talk to Aiden for forever and then hes like are you okay? Or random things like that and im just like hold the phone, get in or get out. :$

-one character down

I'm on chapter 31 and the only people I don't want to punch in the face right now are Aiden, Micah, and Slash u.u dunno if that'll change but...I'm loving it though and I feel sooooo bad for Aiden Dx

Awh, wow. I am loving this still. It is like your in my mind....ahhh....Why? I was never in choir, but at the school I went to I had a choir teacher named Ms. Beck. I also did theatre though, and my theatre teacher we all called her Mrs. C. Haha, but otherwise it really was a great update.

Awww no not Muse!!!!!! Please don't let her die they need to be together!

I really like this a lot. It is not only fairly realistic enough to relate (very much) to, but its held my attention long enough to read in one night all the chapters. Loved it so much. Can not wait to read more.