From the comment swap. It's great to see a Harry Potter story that isn't overdone. This is a breath of fresh air, and whoo, Hufflepuff! The grammar seems to be perfect, not anything I've got on to at least, and this is put together very nicely. Great job. Although, I feel like there's just too much in the summary. I feel like I know too much of what is suppose to happen. I just love this.
WOO~~ HUFFLEPUFF!! <3 I've never actually ever truly read a harry potter story except for a snape story once. I'd have to agree with the comment below, the summary does give away too much of the story. I haven't watched Harry Potter for a while now so this is awesome to relive it. Grammar is excellent. It is nicely put together Very well done.
So far the story is pretty amazing. Nice grammar with a well thought out story. It's been a long time since I actually read/watched Harry Potter. It brings back old memories. The summary seems to give out a little to much of the story though. Overall it's well written. Good job! :)
It's great to see a Harry Potter story that isn't overdone. This is a breath of fresh air, and whoo, Hufflepuff!
The grammar seems to be perfect, not anything I've got on to at least, and this is put together very nicely. Great job.
Although, I feel like there's just too much in the summary. I feel like I know too much of what is suppose to happen.
I just love this.