Crucible: The Accomplice - Comments

This story really fascinates me a lot; I love the whole violence thing going on. This is a good story, hope you finish it.

please please please update

Yay! Oli is learning some things! I really love this story so much! Trust me, this isn't the darkest thing I've read, but it's absolutely perfect. I can't wait until the next update!

Yeah, it's more logical to write it instead of actually doing it. People should appreciate that others who actually want to become serial killers are deciding not to.

You're welcome for the comment though. You're one of my favorite authors & it sucks getting broken up with.

Whoo! Another update! Well, she can definitely take down any fan that gives her shit. I can't wait until the next update! :D

I really loved these last two updates! It really makes me happy & it's super interesting to hear why Oli wants to be like her. It makes me all fuzzy inside...strangely. Anyways, I can't wait until the next update!

Oh, & I'm sorry that you & your boyfriend broke up yesterday, but oh well. He obviously doesn't know what he's losing.

i love the way this is written and the plot is just amazing

@ Rachel Monroe
Oh okay, good. Yeah, I know! He'd be the best sociopath ever! Ugh...Well, I'm really glad that you're writing him that way. It makes me really happy

@ NervousHolyGhost
Oh no, it doesn't. I love it too! But hardly anyone writes him that way, even though it fits him really well.

This story is so interesting! I love it when Oli is a psycho. It makes me smile...god, I hope that doesn't make me sound like a sociopath or anything. I'm so excited to see how everything works out!