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  • The_Awesome_Person

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    Okay, comment swap :) So, this is one of the few stories that I actually read to the end.. Or at least up to the last time you updated. I'm actually pretty sad that you discontinued this (Or that's what it looks like.) The writing just drew me in. Seth is so mysterious and... Different. It's refreshing. Still, I must comment that some of these things seem kind of unrealistic. It is fiction, so you can do whatever you want, but the fact that Ally has nearly every class with Seth, and his hood is SO dark you can't see anything inside of it, kind of felt like it was forcing the plot. I would just try to make it flow a little more naturally. Nevertheless, it was still amazing! I really wish you would update, because I would love to find out what happens.
    April 16th, 2014 at 04:01pm
  • love me always

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    i got really excited when i saw you updated so then i made an inhuman screechy noise like the update :DD
    March 4th, 2013 at 04:27am
  • IceDeath.

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    Haha.I was so happy when I saw that you updated. Lol. I can't wait to read more. Please update SOON!! Lol =)
    March 4th, 2013 at 03:34am
  • love me always

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    please please update soon :)
    January 1st, 2013 at 10:35pm
  • love me always

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    oh my god please update soon :)
    November 28th, 2012 at 12:59am
  • IceDeath.

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    Lol, WOW. mysterious and sexy. Sounds like it but the people who spread these rumors are so two-faced. I bet he likes her cause she's the only one not going ga-ga over him. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!
    October 23rd, 2012 at 12:24am
  • maniii111

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    OMFG...HE SAID HI DSDFMSFGJLDGMDFK
    October 21st, 2012 at 04:47pm
  • Akuma-May

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    Omg! I loved it! i can;t wit for the next one! I am sooo glad I decided to read this thank you comment swap! I an't wait to read more!!
    October 21st, 2012 at 06:43am
  • maniii111

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    AH I Don't care if it was short too! I am excited for the next chapter. Update soon!!! I can't wait!
    Oh, and you're welcome! Your story deserves more than comments!
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:48am
  • Akuma-May

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    I don't even care that it was short. It was fantastic. I can't wit for more!!!
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:43am
  • xLxOxVxEx

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    I wish there was more :( I hit the end of your latest update and frantically searched any hint as to when there would be another update. Hope it comes soon!
    October 21st, 2012 at 01:20am
  • Akuma-May

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    Comment swap:
    Had to admit that when i first saw this on comment swap i was a little hesitant and it took me a while to start reading, but I'm glad i did. your writing style is fantastic, and I didnt pick up on any grammar or spelling mistakes. You say the chapters are short and boring but I dont agree. I find them interesting. Short chapters can be the best sometimes. and in your case they always are. i already reccomended and subscribed, I cant wait for more! keep up the good work
    October 14th, 2012 at 06:33pm
  • maniii111

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    omg I can't stop reading...this is SO GOOD! I will surely subscribe and recommend :) I'm excited for the update!
    September 28th, 2012 at 01:14am
  • IceDeath.

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    Awesome story. I really would love to read more, I'll make sure recommend and subscribe. Update soon!!!
    September 25th, 2012 at 11:29pm
  • anarchist-

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    I love this, it's so good! :)
    September 25th, 2012 at 09:00am
  • love me always

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    :) really good story
    September 25th, 2012 at 08:25am
  • xLxOxVxEx

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    I am really enjoying this story. I was sorely disappointed when I had gotten to the last chapter that You had posted. I really want to know more about Seth! He's so mysterious that it's driving me crazy!
    September 22nd, 2012 at 03:59am
  • AndStuff

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    I'm not so sure it's short and boring as you say in your notes at the bottom, of the chapter entitled "Starting to Notice." It has an air of mystery behind it. Who in the world is Seth Xano, and what is about to happen that this girl doesn't believe is a good thing. To be honest, one of my questions is, what's with the hood. You've got something going here that's good. You should definitely keep on writing. Great job!
    September 21st, 2012 at 07:46am
  • lil' dynamite

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    -comment swap-

    I definitely read this before comment swap and loved it! It's funny how I somehow made it back :D I love this story, and the idea and plot behind it. Seth is a really mysterious character, and I hope he starts poking his head out there soon lol. I love the layout, too! Really simple and nice to look at. Some layouts are so distracting with gifs and bright colors and you can't even read them! Overall, the only advice I can give is to write longer chapters, rather than multiple ones. I hope that makes sense. For instance, chapter 1 and 2 can be put together into one chapter, and it would still work out. Nice job Mr. Green
    September 19th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • WriterSerenity

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    I don't understand how this story doesn't have more comments... =T
    Love the update and I can't wait for the next chapter! =)
    September 19th, 2012 at 02:17am