Okay, comment swap :) So, this is one of the few stories that I actually read to the end.. Or at least up to the last time you updated. I'm actually pretty sad that you discontinued this (Or that's what it looks like.) The writing just drew me in. Seth is so mysterious and... Different. It's refreshing. Still, I must comment that some of these things seem kind of unrealistic. It is fiction, so you can do whatever you want, but the fact that Ally has nearly every class with Seth, and his hood is SO dark you can't see anything inside of it, kind of felt like it was forcing the plot. I would just try to make it flow a little more naturally. Nevertheless, it was still amazing! I really wish you would update, because I would love to find out what happens.
April 16th, 2014 at 04:01pm