Falling for Never - Comments

dark_elmo (100)

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:D yay! Criticism that doesn't consist of "it's good" :d

September 25th, 2012 at 01:57am

Akuma-May (100)

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Some friendly, constructive criticism: Try to fix the grammar and spelling and caps on some of the word, you went into third person at one point for a sentence or two, try not to do that. I know its hard to break out of that habit, but do it. It'll help amazingly. Other than that I loved it :D Can't wait for more!

September 25th, 2012 at 01:49am

dark_elmo (100)

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I sorreh D: love you tooo!!

September 6th, 2012 at 06:08am

Akuma-May (100)

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((Also I had first comment. WOOT!))

September 6th, 2012 at 05:52am

Akuma-May (100)

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((Also I had first comment. WOOT!))

September 6th, 2012 at 05:52am

Akuma-May (100)

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The lack of caps on my name make me want to jump onto the screen and fix it and grag. I'm sorry... I love it you know I don morgy BUT THE CAPS! IT HURTS!

September 6th, 2012 at 05:51am