Marilyn Bradford and the Inheritance - Comments

please continue on here too

Wait.. wait.. wait..wait..
What happened to Ron!?

I wonder if your gonna have a sequel? I also wonder how Ron handled this situation
Otherwise loved it (:

It seems tht Ron and Marilyn r over and it's Marilyn and Draco now, hmm I wonder how tht conversation went and if Ron was forced or if he agree or if he just simply broke up with Marilyn becuz he was jealous, idk I'm happy ur Marilyn isn't in pain anymore, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, obviously Ron is mad but there is honestly nothing for u to do but accept the fact tht Malfoy is the result to stop Marilyn from being in pain, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Marilyn u fool, like honestly there is no way for Ron to help u when ur in pain becuz he isn't ur mate and if u die thts on u becuz u rejected ur mate like a fool becuz u honestly think tht Ron is goin to like u being in pain when he finds out the reason y, he is doin to dump u just so u won't be in pain anymore, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Hmmmm drama in Ron and Marilyn's relationship I see hmm shame but honestly Ron u should pay attention more in class becuz thn he would be less confused and not wanting to get in an argument with Marilyn about Draco being her mate, I think tht if Ron doesn't stop being jealous and angry and insecure about his relationship with Marilyn tht he just might lose her forever, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is so unique. First of all, I’ve never read a Harry Potter fanfic with any teen pregnancy, and I really like the way you handled the situation. It was very mature and sweet in a way, and I think it is very interesting to read about Marilyn’s situation and how she handles her new life. She seems to be adapting well, which shows how strong she is. And I also think it’s really great that you made her still try to follow her dreams, even though there are a lot of different things that are keeping her from accomplishing those dreams! I really like this story!

Oh shit, I like this story it's really great I like it a lot :) mmmmmm I wonder if Ron knows about the whole Veelas have a selected mate based on a scent and a color, I'm sure he is goin to be pissed off when he finds of tht Draco Malfoy is Marilyn's mate, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i love the story! update soon please :)

Update soon:)

please write more this story is gonna be a good one