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I am way to invested in this story so I need to know what happens xD please update soon. Sorry if this or any other things I comment are too bold or annoying. forgive me.
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I'm in love with your character's they seem so really. I love the way you have them interact with each other and with other people. I like the use of description. The story has an effortless feel to it

You know what? Audrey shouldn't feel bad one bit. She didn't do a damn thing wrong and they aren't technically together. And I hope Konrad does feel like shit because he was dating Stacey, she's not dating Gavin.

This is perfect <3 I've been hunting for a new story without luck but I found this today. You made my day, darling. Thank you for being awesome.

Boy, have I missed this.

Omg!! Thank you so much for updating, I have been missing this story!! Keep it coming please.

YAY! I'm so excited you updated! Can't wait for more and to see what happens. I started laughing when he called her a Shiela since I've only heard the bogan ones say it too haha. But still funny lols. UGH to Konrad for being lame -.- he needs to man up and handle already! =]

Well, that happened quickly. And speaking as a citizen of Australia who lives in quite a small country town who has been in the city, I've only ever heard one Aus say Sheila, haha. Only the bogan ones.

i'm so glad you're updating again! i really missed this story :) this Gavin guy seems kinda shady. i'm gonna keep my eyes on him.

Most of the time when I get sent to a story from Comment Swap, I read the first two chapters and comment. That's because they're usually painful and hard to get through. But this, this was perfection.
To start off, I love the layout. Simple, and beautiful.
Audrey and Konrad are so alive in their words and actions, that I just feel and understand them. And I actually really like the short, little chapters. They're small glimpses into their lives and it creates a lot of impact for me. Even down to the interesting chapter titles, everything was important and intentional.
I really enjoyed this, and read everything you had posted and I subscribed.
Update! You've made me an avid reader.

AAAAHHHHH OMGOSH FINALLY, KONRAD!!

OMG that is sooo cute!!!!

OH MY!! didn't see that coming... well actually I did, but I didn't expect it that way! Super cute! :)

Chapters could be a lot longer and descriptive concerning the characters' feelings but this story has a lot of potential and is actually very cute!

Yes!!!!! Finally it happens!! I love how he did it too saying the other girls were rebounds. That was perfect! Update very soon!!!

mmm i'm so glad you updated! i miss this story :D

Yeah update, Konrad is so silly lol

I'm sooo in love with this story.... its pretty darn good , man I am a romantic because of stories like this. and i love Konrad!! lol

The first thing I noticed within the first chapter is that you switch tenses between the first and second paragraph. Also the beginning of the chapter is a bit on the cliche side, instead of describing her reading the book why not jump right into her glancing at the clock and noting Konrad was late again? The chapter was on the shorter side, and I don't think it had the desired effect of how Konrad cheated on her. You might want to add more detail to her feelings of betrayal, hurt, pain, and suffering, and really dig it in deep that they've been dating and he just cheated on her.

BEST BIRTHDAY EVER! SO CUTE! everything he gave her was so meaningful and special =] Can't wait for more!