Slender Man - Comments

Whoa this was good. I didn't expect anything that happened - great writing! D:

This is such an amazing story! The way you write is absolutely exceptional. The plot was very creative and that's what made it interesting. The ending though was a shock but it was good. REALLY GOOD

Keep writing :)

Love this so much... And I thought that Zayn would kill Louis... turned out that Louis became the new SLENDER MAN! OH MY... I love this story!

Since I can not comment on your profile, considering how I have not fully mastered this New Mibba, and I hate it so much, SO HELLACIOUSLY HYSTERICAL that you updated with two more chapters. . . But I have yet to read them, and laready know Niall is dead. . . This saddens my mood. :c And he was murdered by LOUIS!!!!!! : and :

Though. . . : Louis is Der Grobmann. . .? How. . . Is. . . This. . . Possible. . .?

;^;

Sorry about the double post. I do not know how to delete one of them. . .

Since I can not comment on your profile, considering how I have not fully mastered this New Mibba, and I hate it so much, SO HELLACIOUSLY HYSTERICAL that you updated with two more chapters. . . But I have yet to read them, and laready know Niall is dead. . . This saddens my mood. :c And he was murdered by LOUIS!!!!!! : and :

Though. . . : Louis is Der Grobmann. . .? How. . . Is. . . This. . . Possible. . .?

;^;

HOLY POOP JELLY BEANS. That ending...I mean...wow...can I just...no...you are an amazing writer and you made this one of the most perfect mystery/murder(?) fanfics! Argh, IT'S STUNNINGLY GREAT. I JUST... *faints*

You ended it with a BAM!
This is so damn amazing!

o.o Wow, was NOT expecting that one.

IT WAS AN AMAZING STORY. Sorry, caps felt right :)

Great job.

Holy mothereff! Louis is now...

THE SLENDERMAN.

I love this story babe. So, so much! Thank you for getting this out.

You made Louis turn on us! And Niall go! AHHHH! My feels. This is the best story so far about suspense. I love it!

Noooo. Niall, my baby!
Is this based off that Slenderman movie with Jessica Biel? Or is there really a Slenderman legend and I'm just too lazy to look it up? Whatever the case, this is cool. I'm always up for a good horror 1D fic (:
Sad that the last chapter is next because I just found this and want more!

Well, I didn't see that one coming. It's probably quite sick of me to feel this way, but I actually feel bad for Zayn. And poor Louis, too! Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go cry in a corner because Niall is dead. D:

*GASP* OH MH GAWD I JUST THOUGHT HE HAD GONE MAD!!! :O OH MY GOD

Perfection <3

AH OH MY MOTHER OF MARY HELP ME BEFORE I FALL! That alskjfklasdhkfjdhf Zayn and Lou and ashjkashkajsdhoas Fudge, man.

AND I WAS RIGHT. BUT I DIDN'T SEE LOU BEING A PART OF THIS!!

As sick as this is, I like the Zouis element you've inserted in. But still...

Please update some more? I am, unfortunately, obsessed with Der Grobmann, which is dearly unfortunate indeed. . . Considering he's suppose to be a child murderer. . . Moving on though, your layout is hellaciously psychodellic, and awesometacular. Your story is just amazing, as well. Well written, and no grammatical errors. Love. It. I encourage you to please update as soon as possible. Am subscribed and have recommanded your story. :)

Agreeing with notweirdbutunique, I bet Niall saw Zayn. That's my theory because in the little picture or book cover, I guess you could call it that, it's Zayn. This is crazy. I need more.

I have a strange feeling he saw... Zayn. I don't know why. Prolly it's because he's... Nevermind. I'm not going to say it.

Gaaahhhh... Cliffhanger! *pulls hair*

SOOOOOOOOOO UNFAIR! ugh. haha