Ian Matters - Comments

@ ImASucker4Romance
thank you!

Nice Story, I like it!

@ i am rock and roll.
aw, that is a great idea! well, if it makes people feel as good as it made me feel then I'm sure there's a ton of people who more then appreciate it!

@ Elbows

You're very welcome, my dear. I'm doing this thing called comment monsters and it's just where we go around commenting on people's stories and giving feedback in 100 words or more. I don't get anything in return at all, I just really enjoy letting other people know how great their work is. I'm glad I could give you such a helpful comment! You'll definitely be hearing from me again, soon. I very well may continue reading the rest of it and commenting back on it after I finish my Algebra II homework. :)

@ i am rock and roll.
I can't tell you how much I appreciate your comment, seriously, it's not just one of those get it over with kind of comments. Thank you so much, I am so glad you like it, you have no idea! I think you've basically got what I wanted to portray so far, and you've even pointed out to me some things I didn't notice, but that are very, very true! Thank you so much for subscribing and recommending too! I can't wait to hear from you again! I love the last sentence of your comment too, and I think that's great. I think it's what the story wants people to think when they read it, come to think of it. "I can't wait to see how he dies."

I really like this story. Don't know why it's lacking in comments like it is. I like the apathetic air around the whole thing. Ian seems like.. as weird as this sounds, somewhat of a cunt. And I use the word cunt very lightly. I like characters like that, though. They remind me of myself. Sal's cool, too. I like how you've basically portrayed her to be unimpressed with life itself. It's weird, but Sal and Ian just seem to fit together as friends. I've only read the first chapter, but I have in fact subscribed and recommended and do plan on coming back to read and comment on the rest. This just screams brilliancy and I do look forward to being able to read it all! Also, I like the dry tone Ian comes across with, he seems like the best kind of person to me. I can't wait to see how he dies.

@ the_space_between
Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you're enjoying it! More soon XO

This is a cool idea. Can't wait for more.