Catch My Breath - Comments

That chapter was so touching and I can't believe it :)!! I can't wait to read more!!!

Omg she is having twins!!!!! A boy and a girl yay!!!! She is bring two babies in the world I'm soo happy, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love this story! <3

Ah, Brian is so fucking adorable<3 I hope it's a girl.

Love it, I think tht she is having a girl too but I'm just happy in general tht she is healthy pregnant woman, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I'm loving this story =) I read it all today ahah hope you update soon ^^

@ SuchASyn

Alright then. :)

@ Angel of Vengeance
I figured so, lol but that's fine honestly. I haven't had a baby and I've never been to a shower. But thanks, no worries I like to hear for future works :D

No problem. In chapter 4, and sorry to be nit picky and all, but in Chapter 4 when Brian asks about the baby shower and she says within the week, I thought I'd let you know, that baby showers tend to happen when first time mothers are further along. Like really close to their due date because then it allows for more games, such as guess the size of the tummy and stuff like that.

@ Angel of Vengeance
Thank you darling! I thought I got rid of that! <3

In chapter 2, I'm not sure if this was done on purpose or not, but you repeated a paragraph when you wrote in Brian's POV. Just thought I'd point it.

Awe, I hope it's a girl... Can't wait for more :D

I wanna know what it is nowwww! Can't wait to read more of this story :)! It's great :)

nice. loved it.

YES!!!! FIN-A-FUCKING-LLY she said something about Matt and Callie's behavior towards Brian, thank u very much I could kiss u right now, anyhoo they should have saw tht coming i mean it would be different if she was 17 thn go ahead and go protective brother on Brian but she is an adult now and if Brian is the key to her happiness thn leave it alone and she has a point about the sex drive so again drop it like a bad habit guys and Callie tht ship of protecting Lissa from getting hurt has set sailed long ago it's gone and not coming back anytime soon unless u can bring Noah back thn thts the only way it could work but since u r not God tht mission failed drastically i kno u guys feel bad and in shock about her attitude and what she bluntly said to u guys or mood swings if u will but u need to stop and just help her recover to gettin better now instead of jumping on the dick train everytime Brian does something or says something nice to Lissa becuz it's not goin to stop Lissa from killing u with her bare hands if u keep up with this bullshit just saying anyhoo Johnny u better run becuz mama bear is angry and u got her donuts in ur mouth, Jimmy and Ari sittin in a tree k-i-s-s-i-n-g super cute they belong together, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I. FUCKIMG. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!!!!! *Dies in happines* update!!!!!! :D

I'm in love with this story! <3

Awww super cute, Matt ur doing it again chill out man u r starting to growing gray hair if ur sister wants to sleep with Brian thn let her she is tired and pregnant and if Brian makes her sleep more comfortably thn let it happen jeez louise dude u r worse than a nun right now, I'm glad tht Callie step in and told Matt to let them go, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Is bad that I want her and Brian to get together? Can't wait for more!

You, my dear, are a beautifully evil writer. I'm on Chapter 3 and I couldn't contain it anymore I had to comment. Christ on a cracker bro, I love it. It's all sorts of beautiful evil and I can't look away...the feels that is all. Now if you'll excuse me I will now go sit and continue to read this. Continue on, my dear it's beautiful.