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  • Purrito

    Purrito (100)

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    Thanks for the critique. And yeah, I guess I wasn't clear about the whole setting. And I forgot to mention that Homeroom is a 15 minute period before the start of the day. Important details xD Anyway, thanks for the critique!
    September 9th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • which-witch

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    This was very quick. Mildly interesting as well. There are some things I would change, like the lack of description and the shortness of the classes. Little things like that.
    September 9th, 2012 at 10:43pm
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