July 2nd, 2013 at 08:24pm
I really enjoyed this story. I liked how you depicted the downsides to a long distance relationship and how much Logan wants to physically be with her while seemingly accepting that they can't be right now. I thought the details you included, like their communication being mostly through text message and how late she willingly stays up to talk to him, were very realistic and that it appears to temporarily dishearten him, but him deciding it was all ultimately worth it to be with her was very sweet.
It's a good length. You wrote all you needed to and it flowed. I think any more would've just taken away from it really.
It's a very lovely one-shot. It's very well-written and you did a wonderful job capturing the emotions of struggles of maintaining this kind of relationship. It's just obvious how much Logan loves her without having to explicitly say so. I just found it rather beautiful.
Thank you so much