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    Okay just got done with chapter 4, it's now extremely interesting haha.
    September 16th, 2012 at 06:43pm
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    It's definitely interesting, and it's well written enough to keep me wanting to read and find out what's gonna happen. That was your plan right?? Well great job if it was cause it worked haha. The only thing I'd suggest is to add spacing between the paragraphs and also the dialogue between characters. Anyways, keep up the good work!
    September 16th, 2012 at 06:23pm
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