Life on Two Wheels - Comments

So can I just say...this is amazing! Two of my favorite things put together!!!

I found this story through comment swap but I am so happy bc I love the Sons and a7x :) I like that Tessa is not your typical main character and I also liked that Brian actually had to look to find her and she didn't just swoon over him the first day at the beach.

I found this story through comment swap but I am so happy bc I love the Sons and a7x :) I like that Tessa is not your typical main character and I also liked that Brian actually had to look to find her and she didn't just swoon over him the first day at the beach.

Oh, this is getting so good. I really can't wait for more.

I can guess what information she's putting together! In the meantime, though, a girls' night out is called for, so bring on the drinks and the ass shakin'!

Woaah woaaahhh woaaahh.
Sons of Anarchy AND Avenged Sevenfold?

Mind. Officially. Blown.

Haha, Tess cracks me up! =) And Bri is so cute and awkward.

I have to admit that this just keePs on getting better with each chapter. I really like the characters and the attention to detail. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. I love this!

I have to admit that this just keePs on getting better with each chapter. I really like the characters and the attention to detail. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter. I love this!

So I reread the story and I think it's flowing very well thus far. Still in love with the plot and Tess. I think it's so cute that Bri has got a crush and he's never even spoken to her. It's the confidence she exudes.

So awesome to see an update fo this story which came out great. Loved it! xD I'm excited to see what happens when they meet.

This is a great update. I can't wait for more!

Wow its so strange, I fell off this site for a little while and returned today to see that you had posted chapter one and I was so excited. And now you post chapter 2! Yay :) I'm glad that your ahead in your writing because only 3 chapters and you already have me roped in. i love that she's pretty much teasing brian and doesn't even know it. Lol

@ antivist.
first of all -- thank you SO much! i love reading comments like yours. they make everything so much better..especially because you took the time to notice all the small details and point them out. i really appreciate that! and the whole mob thing? yeah, so overdone. i think i've read like two or three like that and i couldn't finish them. i try to make my stories as relatable as possible (i mean, it IS fiction) and i think they need to be human. not..new york gangsters. the banner, i'm going to give credit for was by a user on here NormanReedus. she is SO talented and she always captures exactly what i ask of her.

the whole description thing.. i always try to do like books because they seem to pull me in just enough to want to read more without giving everything away. so that's what i try to do, but i'm also the worst because i've caught myself saying "what will she do now?" sometimes and i have to go back and fix it.

again, thanks for your comment, and i hope you continue to read!! you really made my day!<3

Hi, I'm here for Comment Swap. First off, I like the banner, it goes perfect with what I think it's the mood you wanted to set up for the story. Having Brian Haner Jr. in it it's a plus of course. (I don't read too much A7X anymore but) I loved the prologue, though I don't know very much about Sons of Anarchy, I like where this is going cause it can turn into so many directions, so it would be exciting which one you chose. I have really no complain about the orthography, cause it's very well written, also the theme you choose to make it's very clean, so it's actually nice to have that around. Oh my god! I don't why but I thought it was Brian on the 2nd chapter and I was like.. Wait, so soon!? – But anyways, yeah it was only Kemp, so okay, cool. Another thing I'm gonna praise you on this story is that you haven't turned A7X into a –and excuse my french – fucking mob band, cause that's just so fucking used and it kinda puts me off the story, cause it would be predictable. Having them as what they are – a band, rock band – it's better, more grounded to reality. Well, at least to me. Kudos!

Oh, and you know how to handle that description thing, where you don't wanna like describe everything to them, like “In the corner sat a spider, next to the table that had 4 drawers and in those drawers were carved little stars with names and it was right next to the pink wall--” I think you understand what I mean, anyway. It's perfect not too much or too little. So, yeah... Keep with this you're doing it very well..

Good luck!

Love this. Update soon, please?

I love this. I'm a fan of Sons which I'm sure you know. You are a talented writer, and this just proves it. I can't wait for more.

Just started reading this story. Love the crossover and so far is very good. Can't wait to see where it goes so update soon! xD

@ CharlieHunnam

Oh, ok. Awesome, Can't wait!

@ t0.Live.Eternally...
I'm redoing all the chapters because I didn't like how they were progressing so I'll be posting more soon!