Heartbreak Cemetery - Comments

@ Perrie Edwards;
Thank you:)

Wow, this was quite an amazing piece of writing. I'm so sorry for your loss, love!

The only thing I would agree on is the layout and the spacing of the paragraphs. The smallest things makes the biggest differences in writing sometimes! That's all, love. Beautiful read.

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Wow, this was quite an amazing piece of writing. I'm so sorry for your loss, love!

The only thing I would agree on is the layout and the spacing of the paragraphs. The smallest things makes the biggest differences in writing sometimes! That's all, love. Beautiful read.

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Wow. This was a beautiful read. Such a sad story. I got the chills when I got to the part where she was talking to her grandpa and that was when I realised.

Layout-wise, I think an original layout could be used. Maybe even if you have a pic of your grandpa? Also it would look a lot tidier if you separated the paragraphs. Double-enter fixes that.

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thanks soo much:')

Aw, I'm really sorry about your Grandfather :-( it's so hard to lose a loved one. This was beautifully written, and very sad story, but beautiful and heartwarming all the same.

This is great, I was reading that same story n I was feeling a Lil sad when I was done I click to my profile and it's yu!!! Commenting on my story:)))). We were reading at the same time! Lol that makes me feel like alot better, that seriously made my night thank yu. So much this really means alot to me❤❤

Oh my gosh! That was soooo great! I was listening to So Far Away while reading this and I cried! Sorry about your grandpa, at least you know he's watching out for you and in a better place