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Wow.

Reading this now was a very great decision as well, hehe. I must say, I quite liked it. It was something I honestly have never read anywhere before, not like this anyway. Of course there's stories about complicated relationships, but this took everything to another fucking level and I loved it!
It was such fun to read. It's so unusual, both of them cheating, not really giving that many fucks. I guess I only liked their relationship because I found it entertaining to read about it, but that counts for something. I loved when brian suddenly showed jealousy. It kind of came so...out of nowhere, like, he's in no position to be jealous, really, and it hinted to that little bit of passion he holds for Lena, and I loved that.
I think when he got home and kicked that guy out, the dialog between the two, that was my second favorite part. I kinda felt like it was the center of the story somehow, I don't even know what I'm saying, but I liked it, haha.

I was kind of shocked by what followed when he woke up, and I almost felt like it was too much, somehow. But reading on to see what it led to was fucking amazing The way they started freaking out so crazily, god I loved that and I've been waiting for it! I could picture that in my head so well, them fighting, trying to make each other feel as bad as possible. It was a very great idea!

And of course...
How could I not have liked what followed? muhaha. That sex was incredibly hot, DAYUM. The fight had lit a fucking huge fire and I loved how they let that burn, (Okay that sounded weird, excuse me, xD) I think the sex scene fit in pretty well here too AND DID I MENTION IT WAS FUCKING HOT??? My mind's kinda melted,

Now you get cuddles again for having a bit of ADORABLE at the end This story is gold, from start to finish, fucking perfect. Great job! :)

Awn! Eles são lindos, nhaw.

I love it

Nice. Haha.

Ooooh, me likey

is the title related to get scared in any way?

Loved this darling! I like the way the mix together and actually pair very well. She's not the typical, fuck you for cheating I'm leaving you and he's not the typical, you're in if for my money get out. Nice love, excited to see more stories from you!

I loved them!! They're simply the perfect characters xD
This was great!! :D

I totally loved this, girl :)

this paring was different! And I loved it lol