The Bittersweet Between My Teeth - Comments

it's so hard to read when everything's bunched up! I like the idea of the story but I can barely get my eyes to focus

I like it! Cant wait for more!

My favorite is "Punching in a Dream" and also "The Sun." All of their music is fantastic though! :D

@ atinylittled0t actually it's kinda funny, my best friend made an Avengers playlist and she put Young Blood on it, and it made me think of Tony Stark, so one thing led to another:) That line stuck out most to me, and so I just needed it. I'm SO glad you like it. Any other of their songs you'd recommend??

Thank you guys for all the good feedback! I'm so glad you all like it. I'm working on the next part now, so it'll most likely be up by the end of the week!

I saw the title of this and it immediately grabbed my attention. It's nice to see someone else is a fan of The Naked and Famous! Haha. This is a great beginning, by the way. :)

You know, I was just thinking the other day that someone should write something like this. You know related to an Avenger, dating Spider-Man kind of thing. I really like what you have so far, especially Peter's comment with the whole crying thing. :D I'm definitely subscribing! Please update this soon!!

I like it so far :) can't wait for more