I love the style that this was written in. I haven't come across a story, whether it be chaptered or a one-shot, that is made up of dialogue only. It's seems kind of complicated to get emotions across with just dialogue but I think you've really captured the emotions of the characters and basically the personalities of them as well.
I like the lack of description in this piece and somehow I don't like it. The reason I don't like it is because the dialogue between the two characters makes me wonder more about Adriana and what has happened in her life to come to this point in time. But I do like it because it fills me with questions that will never be answered. I guess it gives me some room to think of senarios about what could have happened to her even if they aren't true. I guess that makes sense.
I like the lack of description in this piece and somehow I don't like it. The reason I don't like it is because the dialogue between the two characters makes me wonder more about Adriana and what has happened in her life to come to this point in time. But I do like it because it fills me with questions that will never be answered. I guess it gives me some room to think of senarios about what could have happened to her even if they aren't true. I guess that makes sense.
This was overall a beautiful piece.