Tarnished Treasures - Comments

when are we gonna see the next chapter?

sweetness! loved the new chapters! can't wait for more!

i miss reading this story i hope you start back up soon

Okay, I am going to read this, but I've been busy and it looks like I'm behind quite a bit. ._.
But I thought I'd just leave this letting you know you still have my support!
Fighting!

I loved learning about Karma's past. I feel so bad for her now having gone threw all that.

I loved learning about Karma's past. I feel so bad for her now having gone threw all that.

I loved learning about Karma's past. I feel so bad for her now having gone threw all that.

I love this story so much! i can't wait for the next chapter!

I was so happy to see this. :D

I caught up.
You need to write more.
Also, cliff-hangers suck.
I realize I suck at giving you real comments but I'm always left with really strong reactions of joy or WHY.
Right now, with this cliff-hanger, it's a WHY moment...
Update?

Ok. I love the background BUT it makes it pretty difficult to read. Maybe fade it out more....?

i just love this story!

i just love this story!

Okay so, I actually do think Karma is trying to be a good mother, but I'm not sure how she's paying for an expensive school for her kid since they'd probably do background checks or at least question where a lot of money is coming from. Plus, I don't think it's even more reckless to be living that kind of life when you know you can potentially lead that sort of thing back to your kid.

I'm also really confused by the description of this eight year old since I'm not sure how realistic that is, and regardless of how mature acting an eight year old is, they're never even remotely close to a young adult because they are still children. The only time i've seen kids that are above and beyond mature are usually the ones that have been neglected to the point where they've had to step up to be the parent figure to either themselves or younger siblings.

PITBULL FTW!!!!!! I totally know what she means!! <3

Lol, very entertaining chapter! I love how she's driving away, Adele comes on, and she has to change it in her dramatic exit. xD Poor Brent...

I trust her even less right now, to be honest. For one, I don't really understand this 'Post It Yourself' thing, since it seems more needlessly confusing and still trackable by the government, so I'm not sure how it'd help her commit illegal acts.

There are a few spelling and grammar errors in this chapter (the one I can think of off the top of my head being putting Adelle instead of Adele) and then there's a paragraph where she talks about how she loves typing and physically typing calms her, but then she says that's the main reason why she never purchased a laptop? She's using a laptop and you can't type on a tablet unless you attach an external keyboard.

SHE STOLE BRENT'S HORN! WTHECK?

Ohhh...Brent not a happy unicorn.

Lovely update, darling!

I liked this chapter and I'm intrigued. Not a huge fan of 'Karma' though and I don't trust her. Especially not since she's in a habit of stealing things. Also, slight correction, you said that Reagan's father has been sitting in jail in an isolated unit. Unless there's an isolation part of jail (which is highly unlikely since you only go to jail for under a year, also known as misdemeanors or while waiting for trial or while being held in contempt of court which is technically 30-60 day sentences at a time), he's in prison. Prison is where people convicted of felonies, which means that their sentences are over a year.

I agree with the comment about the layout as well. Sorry, it just gets a little distracting. Also, be careful with 'your vs you're. You put 'you're biological father'.

I am intrigued though.

i can't wait to read this!!!!!!!!!!