The Forgotten One - Comments

Wow, that was amazing and the ending was...well beautiful. It just wouldn't make sense for it to have a happy ending. Or if some magical curse was lifted because they found true love and they lived happily ever after. That's just not how things work around here and i'm glad I got to read this great story. Great work. :)

This was so awesome. I would've never found it if it wasn't for comment swap, so thank you for doing that.

The only suggestion I have is to proof read it. There were some typos and punctuation issues but that could easily be fixed.

And I'm glad, like the person below me, it didn't have a happy ending. It's almost like it didn't deserve one.

Amazing job.

That was... to make it simple; beautiful. I have always been interested in Greek mythology, but this story took it to an entire new level. I love that I could feel the actual pain radiating off of Gya and almost step into her shoes.

The fact that there was no happy ending made it seem realistic, because in a predicament such as hers, there really isn't a happily ever after.