I Wanna Be Your Dog. - Comments

Oh my God... That 70s Show! I haven't watched this show in absolutely ages and had no idea that people wrote fan fiction about it... Never gave it a second thought! I really like how you have characterised everyone mentioned and kept Eric Forman as he should be! I'm not sure how into this you are at the moment but if it's in progress still, hit me up and I'll definitely subscribe! I really like your style of writing and the fact that your chapters have been consistently short makes for good reading.

Keep it up!

Thanks for the reply! what is the name of the show this is based on by the way? ahaha sorry for the spamming of comments, i am just incredibly nosy ^.^ I hope you write the next chapter soon, au revoir yet again c:

I don't really know what show this is from, probably because im British but anyhow ^.^ The chapters you have written so far are actually excellent! I agree with this person below me, you should definitely keep on writing c: The summary thing makes me want to keep on reading, so be sure to send me a notification or a message when the next chapter is ready:) your style of writing is intrigueing yet you could try to use a little suspense :D

au revoir!

Comment Swap brought me here and I am glad it did. I used to love That 70's Show as a kid. It is so great that you made a new character. Unless they already were a character and I missed something. Oh well, it is the style of your writing that I think was the most enjoyable part of this story. The amount of detail in everything was great; you even made the pot scene mature and interesting which is something that kind of made the show a bit meh to me. Keep writing cuz you have some serious skill.

"Red thought I was a dumb ass" Red thinks everyone but Kitty is a dumb ass.