If You Only Knew - Comments

Aw I'm glad nana told Brent! Her mom is a little both though. I hope they keep the babies and the medicine helps her.

Yayyymichelle and Kyle are engaged and with child! They are like a subtle low key cute. Can't believe this story is wrapping up

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Ahhh okay I see What you're saying. Well I do Love them together so I hope they're ready!

@ xxoomwauhzxxoo I imagine at this point, it's been around a month or so since they started to have sex. It might seem half baked but there's much more to it than is just read, I mean it's not just going to end there. In some sense it's like those stories of people having that love at first sight, moving too fast, yet not going all Romeo and Juliet.

OMG! Ready for babies already?! They just started having sex! It seems very half baked!!

They did it! They sure skipped steps though. Lol. From light kissing to sex

Sooooo I'm guessing that's Brent's babies?! Omg! what is Nana going to do?!

What did she do to his room?! I cant wait for the next update. :)

Michelle is hilarious! Epic game winning goal for Blackhawks lol

aw beth is sweet. that would have got suppperrr awk if it was riley coming in

Okay, so I haven't read all of the story..yet. What I have read though has been amazing. It's easy to relate to, it's funny and the story line has some kind of mystery to it I can't quite put my finger on. My only note, is that in the beginning chapters, the characters with all their nicknames and stuff become kind of confusing. Apart from that, I love it!

i feel so bad for nana :( I hope she finds another friend or fuck buddy, whatever works lol !

LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I really like Nana and Brent together. Please update soon!

Aw I love how awkward and adorable Michelle and Kyle are. And Nana and Brent are so cute even if they have the love hate relationship lol

Hell yeah lol

SeX games...yes

Hi. Ive been reading this story since you were on like chapter 22 and i keep coming back. It appeals to me because of its simplicity. I mean that i am 20 years old and I can relate to the characters and I like them. Its a fun way to kill some time. It doesnt take too much thinking to follow the story, and its funny.. I like the elements of sports and when a7x made an appearance because that stuff is cool. I know you probably write it pretty quickly, but you guys are good at it and match up your styles pretty well. I would like to see more literary elements like alliteration and metaphors and definitely more descriptive and meaningful parts added to the style because the basics are definitely there. Maybe more vocabulary, yeah, that would be good. Like noone ever reflects on anything that happens or thinks out loud about a kind of deeper sensation. Thats cool but it seems kind of 2D sometimes. Ill still keep reading though haha. So thanks for the entertainment and now its time to read the new updates. Maybe throw in a current event? Or a vacation to Miami where Nana meets the love of her life? LOL
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yay ! glad shes okay...well shes not really okay but shes back ! and oooo brent swooped in like the love of his life was down :)

Michelle really shouldn't have left her in the first place. If Nana didn't come out then Michelle should have called or went to find her. and she should have said something when she got the call!!!
Savee her, guard dog lol!