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  • DaniGates

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    So darn cute. I can't even anymore. Haha. I loved it.
    December 21st, 2012 at 09:34am
  • unbroken13

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    That was actually very adorable. I liked it quite a bit.

    xx
    October 1st, 2012 at 05:18am
  • carousels;

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    This was adorable, and it made me smile in many places. Harry is so sweet in this story, and your writing is amazing. I found no grammar mistakes to distract me from the story, which is amazing. I think you described everything amazing.

    Overall, I loved the story. It was sweet, and people can relate to how Halle feels, unwanted and unloved. Well done!!
    September 16th, 2012 at 05:44pm
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