The Bringer of Light. - Comments

@ Sunber
Haha, like I explained to Emmelz Liebe, Snappers are biting animals you can find under rocks. I wanted to leave that explanation out so people could use their imaginations on it.
And you mentioned The Uglies, but I've never read those books. So maybe that's good that this is similar to those novels?
Who knows.

But yes, Naputin is earth but in the very, very distant future, a Pangaea all over again. (:
I'm glad you like it, <3
But yeah, I was considering making it into a chapter story, because I love it that much.

Very interesting concept; although, I ADORE ideas of dystopian futures. It has vague similarities to "The Uglies" by Scott Westerfield, but also its own ideas. At first I thought this was a completely different world called Naputin, but from what I understand, it is Earth except that the continents collided again just like Pangea?

What's a snapper? You didn't elaborate on it, but I did bring to mind visions of...large, snapping animals that tend to chase people.

I feel like the small camp should move to the southern half of the world, since that half considers Specials "special".

This has a good message. though. Good job! :D

You should consider expanding this; perhaps making it into a full-out story. It is such an interesting concept and I can see if going places. Well done!

@ Emmelz Liebe
Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it (: Snappers are a mystery to us all, but they're biting animals you can find under rocks. They're delicious with a pinch of salt to 'em, roasted over a fire ;)(totally fictional animal)

This was really nice! I liked it! :)
The meaning behind it was also really deep and I think everyone should definitely embrace themselves and life as well.
I also thought that it was cool how you made it unique by having people with powers called Specials, and how she found out her power. I think I would have liked to know what a Snapper was, though. Haha (x
But nice work on this!!