I Think I'll Die Alone. - Comments

  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Love it <3
    Gee and Mikey should tell Frank, and Frank should freak out a bit but let them change him into a vampire and they should all fall in love and be together in smuttyness forever :3
    November 4th, 2012 at 08:03am
  • RainbowsEnd

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    I love it! Please update!

    xoxo fuck sincerely

    Rebecca

    P.S I get cookies, right love? ;)
    September 19th, 2012 at 01:22am
  • RayTorosArmy

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    @ Mcrtomboy
    Ah! Thank you!Xo
    September 18th, 2012 at 09:29pm
  • Mcrtomboy

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    @ RayTorosArmy
    Lol yes it was, kinda small and sad on my part but it was. And as for the other part it'll be better explained later on in the story. Sorry for the confusion, I hope that clears everything up for you! Mr. Green
    September 18th, 2012 at 05:39pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    Was that waycest? I'm confused. What do you mean Mikey is Gerard's vampire mate? Maybe it's just me being stupid and reading 125 stories at once but like I would appreciate some confirmation. Other than that, it's very well written.
    September 18th, 2012 at 05:32pm
  • firearnok

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    This seems like an interesting idea, and I'm intent on reading this fic, but as you said in the description, your grammar is not good enough to publish it without getting it beta-ed.
    You made a mistake spelling 'grammar', you spelt it 'grammer' and your first chapter is called 'Your Dying', I believe it's 'You're Dying' ? :/

    I suggest you search for a beta, or let me correct your chapters so they can contain less grammar mistakes.

    Message me if you're willing to receive my help on that ! :-----)

    Overall, a great idea for a story ! Yay for Fraycest.
    September 18th, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • RainbowsEnd

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    I bring forth my comment! Looking forward to the rest, now...UPDATE!

    xoxo fuck sincerely

    Rebecca
    September 13th, 2012 at 02:09am
  • Sapphire Sky

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    Comment virginity=MINE!! Muwahaha!
    I popped the story's cherry. xD

    I think this will be a very interesting story and I am looking forward to reading more of it.
    So with that being said.
    UPDATE!!

    Much love,
    Sapphire Sky\m/
    September 12th, 2012 at 07:17pm