Comment swap brought me here: This story is great! I love it sooooo much!!!!<3 :] Your an amazing writer and I love your layout super awesome! <3 Keep on writing and making us happy with updates <33 -FrankiePlusGee <3333333
you're a fabulous writer, that much is easy to see just in the prologue. it pulls you in quite easily, leaving you wanting to know what exactly is going on. i subscribed because i love your writing style & your details. it feels like it comes easily. in all honestly, i'm in love with your attention to detail. why can't everyone write this way? i felt like i was experiencing what i was reading. beautiful. my only critique: you do start your sentences with the word "he" a lot. but other than that i have no criticism. :)
Naww, this was so intimate and she sounded so content. I would have gladly lied down with them.. and no, i'm not creepy at all haha But I am starting to wonder. I mean is there a reason as to why they're so comfortable with eachother? It seems almost like they'd get drunk off eachother's presence or something.
So I just started reading this today. All I can say is WOW. Seriously, that was better than I had expected. I absolutely loved it! Please please please update soon! You left on a cliffhanger. I wanna see Scout's reaction!
Oh my god this is absolutely amazing! I'm so intrigued about what's going to happen and what's different about Scout to let her see and feel Billie Joe; and why he can feel her but not anything else. Please update soon!
I'm with Poison_n_Blood, I can see these two being together. It definitely means something that she can not only hear him, but cant actively interact with him, including hugging him.
I adore this story. I'm actually happy that I'm sick so I was able to read it. I'm usually a quiet reader, but as an author myself I know what it's like to want feedback and since I love the story so much, I wanted to leave some :)
I'm excited to see where the story is going. I feel bad for Billie, his life and after life are so tragic. I can't wait to see her response to who he actually is, and finding out that he's a ghost.
I can't help but notice you've gotten more than three comments, so you should spoil us by updating ;] I'm sick and in bed and need more!
You know, in response to @NerdGlasses ' comment...I actually think they COULD be together. If she can feel him, hear him and interact with him--Well, there's no stopping them now! I don't think Bill would let her get away very easily, anyway. Sure, they wouldn't be able to go public, and if she were to decide to stay with him for the rest of her life...well, she'd just have to be known as the old maid!<3 Or she could kill herself to be with him without any complications...except for the fact that that is the riskiest option, as she may not manifest as a ghost near him, or manifest at all, for that matter. That's my two cents on that! (: P.S. I think they're gonna do the dirty soon enough, love. Just you wait.
1. Wow! This is something different. Different but good. Fantastic even! It makes me sad though, to know upfront that they can never really be together. 2. I'm surprised he hasn't jumped her bones yet! I know I would have done it, if I hadn't been touched in 7 years ;) 3. And most importantly, please update soon!!!!!
Comment swap brought me here. So I read the first chapter and I couldn't get over how well your writing and descriptions flows. I'm not usually one to comment too much on the layouts of stories but this one definately pulled me in and did great justice for the story. As for spellind and gramar I litterly couldn't find anything so that's an amazing plus.
It's very easy to read, the paragraphs are the right size and the font is to. I felt myself wanting t read more and more and I pretty much got lost in the first chapter and everything you described so well I almost felt it happening. Not many writers I find on here through comment swap can actually acheive that. It's so good I'll just have to subscribe!
This doesn't have to count as a second comment, as I know you were looking for at least three to update...And I warn that this will be long...I just really wanted to say something: I clearly remember when this was first posted. I literally thought that it was such a far-out and crazy idea to have a story called "Caliginous"--as I believe it was first titled--that starred none other than the beautiful Billie Joe. I remember thinking 'What an odd concept--To have a GHOST Billie?' I was more than excited to read. And when I did, I was so entranced and awestruck by your ability to write with such patience and maturity, all while keeping us hooligans interested! I couldn't wait for the second chapter. And I have to say, it only got better from there. When you changed it to "Sous La Pluie"- you tricked me at first, but I was not going to let you get away that easily. I checked as many times as I could for an update, and if you didn't, I'd sometimes re-read a chapter to tide myself over. That's why I was so excited when you re-wrote part of it. At first, I was apprehensive, as I'd loved the original so much, but I got over it quickly as I would be given MORE to read. And It really wasn't ALL that different, anyhow. So...I don't want to talk your ear off, as I've already confused you before--So I'll get to the point; After the first word, "The Fire Under His Skin" became the best thing I've ever read. Please keep writing--And I don't just mean this story, I mean that I expect you to be published someday. I love you so much.xx P.S. As much as this IS my favorite thing, I have to shout-out to @GemVicious for being as awesome as she is with her writing AND reading this awesome thing you've got goin' on. You both rock more than you'll ever know.
Why are you so skilled. STOP. No, don't stop. I was kidding. I love you too much. This is just to good for my eyes. Not. Yes. WHY. I LOVE YOU. THANK YOU FOR LOVING ME, TOO.