post it!!!!! and agh! just end it with chase already! its better to be alone than miserable. even if she doesnt let herself get back with alex, even though there is no reason not to, doesnt mean she needs to be with chase
shes fucking dumb. thats all. anyone that stupid deserves to stay with an ass like chase. yeah she'll have constant alright, constant abuse. have fun with that
"The fact that tomorrow you'll be gone and Chase will still be here" that's deep. I really like it! I love this story and the plot is really interesting and your writing is so simple yet really awesome. That is all. :)
Great start to the sequel! But, um, Leah seems to bring my mood down. She's quite the bitch, actually. Becoming enraged over small things, albeit common pet peeves that you could explode over, but nevertheless. It worries me. She's acting down right mean to almost everyone, but mainly Chase and Alex. I understand that she's pushing Alex away still, and you need some way to portray a bad relationship with Chase, but I feel like it could be attempted in another way. It seems quite unrealistic that the yells and cusses out and threatens this rich boy and he continually just comes back tryin to hold her or calm her down and she doesn't see how unreasonable she's being. Plus Alex is a pansy, beating himself up inside just before a concert. And she says, if he wanted he back he'd say something, but obviously not. It just seems rather pointless. I liked the first story, and think this will be good too, but if Leah is always enraged, Alex is always depressed and moody, Chase is continually whiny and lazing about, and the others are the matchmaking friends, I can already see where this is going... Please understand that this comment is just to explain my position and feelings, and to let the writer know what is being perceived, in case they wish to tweak anything a little. And, if nothing is changed because that is the right of the writer and their creative license, that's fine too, I'll probably continue reading... :)