Escaping for Freedom - Comments

I really enjoyed reading this. The way you put sentences together is really lovely, and I found myself having to stop everything else to finish reading it. The ending too, was so lovely, I love that you ended it with dialogue, it fits really well. Good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering.

I can't even explain how much I loved this piece. Your writing is just remarkable and I love the way your descriptions flow so perfectly. I also like that you used the story itself to get the plot moving instead of relying on dialogue. It made the story seem so much less forced, and it brought out a lot more of the feelings of the piece. I really like the way you incorporated the photo in this work and it was really interesting to see the way it inspired you!

Good luck and thank you for entering Mibba's Photography Contest!(: